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Re: Oh Gray Threads!
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Feb 28, 2010
this is a really good poem. I love all the contrast It is such a good idea When i saw the title i was thinking oh boring i will look ... -
Re: I'll Fly with You
This is really good lyrics flows well and very moving but it sounds incomplete hoever!
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Re: People of the Earth 14/05/09
hey this poem is really good Not too long not too short =)
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Andrew--True Story
Hello, I know this was written like 4 or 5 years ago, but I still would like to review it. but what I am really thinking is: wow this is ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Essence
short and sweet just how I like it. It really is very good and you should be proud You don't need any more information put in there maybe just put ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: me, myself and I
Hello don't be so negative! it isn't as bad as you made out. Infact I really likke it evers so much! well done!
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Paper Dolls
this is a very good inspiring piece. It was really good, I could imagine a tune that would work really well, and it realllycaught me.
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Facebook Mania!
I agree the stupid facebook is so adictive. My mum had to sendme holiday to get me off it! But whatever. This was really good, and I could really relate ...
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Re: waves
never never never never never! you are too modest MINE IS NOT BETTER THAN YOURS yours is really good, how could mine ever be better? well done
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: waves
heya I loveed it, inspired by me? cool thankyou silented 1, yours is very good. :) well done!
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Silent hill Girl in the Fire ch 6
I am still really enjoying this and I know why. Because it is very good, and very cleaverly written. I really appriciate it soo much well done continue with it ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: waves
them is the waves!
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Unseen
Hey I am going to review yours today! although I reviewed it before I didn't critique! In the first stanza I can see where you are coming from, and I ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Silent hill Girl in the Fire ch 3
cool. when are you putting it up? How far have you got with the whole thing so far?
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
I really liked it very facinating very short precise and straight to the point you needed to say one thing, and you said that one thing you didn't ramble you ...
Jul 16, 2009
