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He and I share everything comma from glass jars filled with hopes written on torn paper edges to the last slice of pizza on rainy Friday nights. great beginning We ...

It was then that I realised , as a naive child, that nobody is invincible no matter who they are. realized Here is another example of the fascinating talent it ...

Look at them: resilient and lighter than air a tail of ribbons fashioned into helices Good beginning. They push at the ceiling optimistically bobbing; attempting to escape into space. However[color=#F

may i borrow this......for realz...... really good poem.Quality work and authentic swag to it. I know swag is not appropriate for describing a poem but it just happened. Great work, ...

Wow, where do i begin? This poem is amazingly well written and contains an enormous amount of talent. You, are the next big thing in poetry. I might even be ...

The fish es jump over the bridge, soaring upstream to reach the high waters. They catch plump flies, green, that hover just below silver boughs which in the sunlight do ...

I agree wholeheartedly with this poem. Punctuated as it might be, it was accurate and simply effortless. Sometimes life is always hard, can't seem to ever play the right card. ...

First let me say it is the shortest poem I have ever reviewed. Not only that, but i like the flawless effort you put into writing this mini poem. It ...

I never said that I'd be there for you, that I'd care for you. I never meant that I would stay with you, I never wanted to. We never had ...

Come, me merry Gents and Misses, and hear me morbid tale o'twist'us, Ye fear the sound revenge insist'us, as a weary yeep o' mist encrypt'us. not sure what to make ...

WOW. Where hace you been all this time.? First, my hat is off to you for pulling this off. Second, yo deserve respect for putting gemstone colors in the story. ...

Chronological routine......i like it. Original to you and definitely one of a kind. A fitting reminder of how cruel, the morning actually can be.....sometimes........always. The level of detail used i

This nearly brought back memories of my long forgotten yet not too far gone childhood. This is perfectly written and simply easy to read. The fact that it is a ...

a few minor spelling mistakes....... I was one of those, Abigail and I where in my room were I got ready to get on in the car and when't to ...

Again, review your work before submitting it to be evaluated by the world. This ensures two things: no annoying comments about minor errors and you become a more talented writer. ...