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Ahg! Cliff Hanger! I love it ! Corrections in blue, Compliments in red , Questions in pink By the way welcome to YWS! In a small town on the outskirts ...

I really like this poem. It seems like a song to me and I sang it also. You've left me broken But you don't care All you here is my ...

Wow! you rhymed!! I love it! I haven't seen any poems rhyme on here lately. Day after day, Year after year I spend all my time, Sitting right here. Waiting ...

Okay I've never met you so HAI!! My smile is not real anymore. I only smile when I am forced too, This has changed because you've broken my smile. This ...

I've never met you before so, Ello! She hears the rain falling on the window, trickling down the frosted pane, OOH! I like how you said frosted pane. and she ...

Dear Peer Pressure, You've come to know me as the number one cause of death (Maybe you should have a period?)/color] You blame me for every dead body that the ...

you got one more chanse cause baby i cant take it anymore and i mean it cause baby baby i mean it i mean it iii meeen iiittt cause baby ...

As I got my schedule, I decided to compare it with Rainee's. I had EVERY class with her! Oh great. How am I going to survive here? As I entered ...

I've never been on a camel, I've never owned a nuclear weapon. I dont own a bulletproof vest, I dont bomb random communites. don't Yes I pray five times a ...

I really like this ! the impression of being crippled by the coldness of their gaze the innocence of her gestures their words become a blaze a SPACE thousand tears ...

I really like this . You said grammar doesn't matter but punctuation does right? Sorry if it doesn't. Take your dullest words Comma And drive them through my chest Period ...

Red Crescent: The twilight saga continued... Introduction Through unpathed waters and undreamed shores love shall venture, but when you are forced to roam the earth forever more; is just love ...

Later that day, I was finally allowed to see Jade, Shadow, and James. After the flurry of questions and talking, We all looked at Mr. Smile (who Fern told me ...

This is a really good poem I even pm ed you though whatever it says you can probly ignore because Its late and Im half asleep but other than that ...

WOW I hope you put this up for the Journal this ROCKS so cool so so cool. At first I didn't get It but then I started understanding. I can ...