dante93

his reminds me of so many ancient poets, who's words were simply put, an easy to read, but suggested something more. Of course their works were much longer, but i ...

The people above think this poem fluctuates to much and cannot identify a voice, but I disagree. I can clearly see a voice here, and I certainly understand the message. ...

This poem is good. I like how short it is compared to many others that drag out the effects of slavery. Not to say those are bad ideas, I just ...

I like this poem, especially since I just posted one on this same topic. It is a chilling thought indeed that few follow pure desire rather than what reason tells ...

I understand what you try to do with this poem, but it really is not that good to be honest. I'm not saying that idea is not solid, but the ...

It kind of leaves a bitter taste in my mouth. I get what you are trying to do, but the arrangement is off. Many of the lines are jumbled, and ...

You certainly did do a good job here. I do not know if you meant to play on the abstract idea of poetry, but if you were you pulled it ...

This poem is great. The content is wonderful, and the meaning can have so many interpretations. However there are some structural problems, that is in flow. But these are not ...

Overall I liked the poem, but the other comments are right. Your first stanza is a bit choppy, but the overall message is great. It invokes what we as human ...

It reminds me of Robert Frost, one of the greatest poets to have ever lived. His poems were deceptively short, but when looked at close, has mountains, upon mountains of ...

I would not change much in this poem. It made me feel at peace, like several poems I have written about the sea, about my own personal paradise. It may ...

Listen to the previous post if you wish to pursue this type writing, other wise you will not be able to adequately write a love poem. I have written many ...

This is indeed one of the better poems I have read. The structure is great, and the meaning is deep, and close to whats left of my heart. I think ...

No one ever loses the talent to write, they are just blocked from ideas. I like this poem for the most part, but some lines did not flow as well ...

Nice short poem. It is simple at first, but contains a very deep meaning. I like it, though one of the above comments is right with the question begin a ...