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Re: the cosmos
Hello, Its me What i liked about this poem is the consistent rhyme scheme. I know it's childish but i love poems that rhyme. The words were well chosen. It ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: Shower
Hello, its me This is one of the most beautiful pieces of works I've read on young writers society. The choice of words is excellent. The poem has an amazing ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: This City of Glass (1) - Go Ahead
Hello, its me ! First of all I loved the title. When I saw it in the green room I knew that I just had to read it. The way ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: Letters To Heaven
Hello, it's me! First of this was a lovely story. It was very sweet and pulled at the heart strings. Your story really pulled me in wanting to read more ...
Jan 15, 2016 -
Re: Her last wish.
Hello, its me ! First of all, I loved this story it was an amazing piece. I enjoyed reading that and that is the most important thing in my opinion ...
Jan 13, 2016 -
Re: The good news
Hello, its me! This is so good. I loved reading this. It made me feel exited for the character. It is a very good description of innocent love. The story ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: Lesson to Learn
Hello! I absolutely love this it has a nice story to. The story of the poem was easy to understand. The poem had a beautiful poem to it. Even though ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: fear
Hello! Before I start reviewing, I am really exited to read this. The title was interesting to me. This is a very relatable poem . Fear is something everyone has ...
Jan 7, 2016 -
Re: After You
Hello! First of all before I review I am super exited to read this. I loved the way this was written. It tells a very clear story to me. I ...
Jan 7, 2016 -
Re: The Elves' Protest
Hello! I really liked this it was a unique twist on a well known study. I thought this story was hilarious. I didn't find any grammar mistakes. In the 8th ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Life on the Beach
Hello! First things first, the imagery you used in this is fantastic. Everything you describe i can see it. The story has a beautiful flow to it. It has a ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Glass Cage
Hello! The first thing that I loved was the poem you wrote in the beginning. It was very clear and had an excellent rhyme scheme. This story was well thought ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: A Promising Future
Hello! Praise: I love this its relatable in so many ways. The overall message of this was good. It was enjoyable to read. I love the style that you wrote ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: This pen...
Hello, Before I start reviewing, I'm exited to read this and can't wait. I love this it's got good satire that made me laugh. It was dramatic. It was fun ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Dear Santa Claus
Hey, I'm super exited to read this I loved this it was super cute and funny. Your rhyme scheme was good. It had a very nice flow to it. I ...
Dec 15, 2015
