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Thanks for the reviews.

Thanks emmer132010! You thought right, I do appreciate the reply.

Wow, I loved it, especialy the last stanza. This is great! Well done and keep writing! :D

I think this poem is really good. I don't really know what else to say. Keep writing! :D

This poem is so true! I liked it. Keep writing! :D

I liked it. Green is my second favourite colour. Anyways I loved the end the best. Keep writing! :D

Nice. You tell the story quite well. Personally I think your punctuation is fine but then again I'm no expert. My shoes sink in mud in the mud? Maybe that ...

This was great. I loved the ending. Keep writing! :D

I liked this even though the end was sad. Well worded and keep writing! :D

I liked it. I think we all do that at least once. The rhyming was great. Keep writing! :D

Wow, you have lots of socks! Lol, anyway nice poem. It is very different and well written. Keep writing! :D

I never thought of trying to rhyme purple with anything. This poem is so true. I liked it. Keep writing! :D

I liked this poem. it was really good. I liked the idea of it. Keep writing. :D

I like the way this poem is writen, but I don't particually like the subject but that might just be me. Keep writing! :D

I agree, although real music can be many different things. Keep writing! :D