Smile!

by cupcake

Published February 17, 2011

Smile 'till your cheeks hurt.
You'll have a lot more fun.
When you're happy smile,
You can never be done.

Have fun with all your friends.
Just smile all the way.
Your smile looks so great,
So have a happy day!

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MissRockers
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MissRockers commented Comment · Feb 20, 2011

Perfect poem to cheer people up! I like it a lot. It's the perfect length too, short and sweet.

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cupcake
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cupcake commented Comment · Feb 20, 2011

Thanks for the reviews.

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Upile
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Upile commented Comment · Feb 19, 2011

wow this poem is extra cute and it made me do exactly as it instructed smile.. That was super cute.
Bravo hun,
Keep it up!
x Upile x

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qaralynn
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qaralynn commented Comment · Feb 18, 2011

hahah this poem made me laugh XD nice write!

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cupcake
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cupcake commented Comment · Feb 18, 2011

Thanks emmer132010! You thought right, I do appreciate the reply.

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emmer132010
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emmer132010 wrote a review Review · Feb 17, 2011

Very short and cute poem. To be honest, I couldn't help but smile when I read it. I don't know if I can offer any real criticism on the poem but it's just so fun and cute that I thought you might appreciate a reply about how much I liked it. :)



If you can't get out of your comfort zone, you'll never find what you're looking for. Don't make things quick and easy to feel better short term. Make a change and then you'll feel better longer term.
— Frinderman