19 years on this planet,
Do you not feel like your life has ran its
Course and filled the earth with your joy
Not sure there’s really much room left
That’s more likely why there is a whole in the ozone layer
Not greenhouse gasses it was your excessively large smile!
19 years on this planet,
Not sure your life has really ran its
Course. I think there is much more left to give,
Your smile can grow and get much more big
So god help us! This ozone hole might kill us all
But it is well worth it if your having a ball!
Ayways. HAPPY BIRTHDAY my dear.
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I liked this poem. it was really good. I liked the idea of it. Keep writing.
I like the idea behind this, and also that it's a birthday poem. Just a few nitpicks:
Overall, I did like this piece, especially the line "not greenhouse gasses it was your excessively large smile." Not sure why, I just really liked that line... Anyways, hopefully my nit-picking was helpful.
~Blue