Rewriting the past

by CuteJackRussell

Published February 17, 2011

In Dramatic Poetry

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Hi, this is from memory so I'm sorry if it's a little mixed up, but hopefully you enjoy it. Please comment as I love to hear
feedback! Thank you!


Pain seeps to the surface,
Staining the disguise I wear.
Memories slip silently through the cracks,
Tears roll down my cheeks.

No one is here anymore,
They've all gone.
I pushed them all away,
I hurt everyone who meant no harm.

If only tears could wash away memories,
Wouldn't life be simple?
Come to me,
Help me forget.

Hand me a blank sheet of life
and we can start writing a new story.
Forget the wicked past
and look into the untold future

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qaralynn
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qaralynn commented Comment · Feb 18, 2011

absolutely love it!! great write..don't have any criticism XD

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Ninafutura commented Comment · Feb 17, 2011

WOW very beautiful the way you shaped the words and sentences well done!
I love how I didn't rhyme. You can't do anything more creative than right a beautiful, flowing, and un-rhyming poem.
I loved it!!

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cupcake commented Comment · Feb 17, 2011

Wow, I loved it, especialy the last stanza. This is great! Well done and keep writing! :D



Journeys end in lovers' meeting.
— William Shakespeare