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I like this poem. It's really good. In the last stanza, you changed the rhyming pattern, which didn't quite fit. Apart from that, it is great. Keep writing! :D

This is rather good. You did a great job with this. Just on thing, in the first and last part you rhymed every two lines like this, Things I never ...

I love how this poem represents the truth. The repetition of the line Welcome to our society, and the rhyming makes this poem flow well. Today's society is so different ...

Hello lovethelifeulive. This is great! I really enjoyed it. Just a couple of errors (they're probably just typos, but I thought I should point them out). 10:54 it blinked in ...

Hi there! This is great and it flowed well. The message is clear (or at least it is to me). Just one thing. Stop. Start.No, too late for change I ...

I just have to say I love this poem. It's just what I needed to read after a long day. Congratulations on having a fetured poem. That's all Keep up ...

I love this poem! The rhyming works really well. The thing I like the most about this poem is that it is so true. Just one thing, when your feeling ...

There’s nothing more relaxing Than laying on the almost-green grass Watching flowers bloom Under an early-spring sun I love doing that! Little tulip buds sway In the cool breeze About ...

I like this poem and the way you translated your poem from English to Spanish. I don't know how to speak/write in Spanish but I still like it. I don't ...

Maybe I write of the pain because pain is all that I feel. I just think it sounds better with "that" there, but you may not like it. Maybe I ...

I agree with the last two reviews (about the cliche parts etc.), so I won't repeat that. Wait, wait, suffer, cry, And then, finally die. I don't think you need ...

This is cute. I loved it. Pencils run away from me too. It almost seems like I repel pencils. It's great to read a poem that isn't sad or depressing. ...

I love this poem! It's very true. I just have to tell you, this is my favourite part; Where you speak your mind and rules are broken You can live ...

I liked this poem. It can be true that "Pretty girls do ugly things" but not all pretty girls do, for example, my friends don't do ugly things. Anyway, great ...

Hello zell, I think you need to use more disciption in this poem. Also you need to be a bit more creative. Anyway, keep writing! :D