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  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Autumn

    Hi! Sorry this is going to be short, but..... IM HERE! I love autumn personally. It's one of my favorite seasons! I am fortunate enough to live in a place ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Slaves of Time

    What a powerful concept. I love this so much! Your originality and creativity really shines through in this. AMAZING WORK! I hope you will post more work like this! Sorry ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Politics Re: God Help Us and Those in Paris...

    What a tragedy, what happened at Paris. I'm lucky enough that I don't know anyone who was in Paris at that time, or known anyone who knew a victim. But ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Health, Realistic Re: Sleep Paralysis

    I love researching this phenomena. I found it intriguing that many people can experience the same hallucinations (old woman, shadow figure, etc.) without even knowing the other people. You really ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Other » General, Literature Re: Crush

    This is a beautiful piece. It perfectly describes having crushes. I myself am considered "boy crazy" by my friends. So I relate to this quite a bit. I loved these ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: The Ghost's Whisper ( Chapter 1, The Dream and Boys )

    Sorry, accidentally submitted this twice. Just read the one above this! Thanks! Happy Writing!

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: The Ghost's Whisper ( Prologue )

    I think this is a really good concept for a story! You should definitely continue this into a story, (as a matter of fact I'm going to head and read ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 3.3

    Hi! I just want to start this off by saying I haven't read the previous parts. But NO MATTER! I will still review spelling/grammar. Sorry again that I can't help ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: A Waste of a Life.

    I actually liked this a lot! Short and sweet, just like I like pieces like this. You have a really good concept here! Being used through life is a powerful ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Ashes 3.3

    Hi! I haven't read your whole story, so I can't really comment on the content. Sorry about that! I'll just look for spelling/grammar suggestions. Sorry again, but I hope these ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: BIRTHMARKED - Synopsis and Chapter One (incomplete)

    Wow. I love this concept. I have never heard of anything like this! The whole idea of a birthmark judging your future actions.... wow. I've never thought of that. You ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Lovely Story 1

    I am completely and wholeheartedly in love with.... this piece! (I can literally relate SO MUCH!) Your ability to capture what you did in this amount of words....... JUST WOW! ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Horror Re: Two Trolls

    I liked this very much. I haven't read too many pieces based on trolls, so unique ideas like these are always refreshing. The ideas of pieces like these are truly ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: People of the Shadow (prologue)

    What an intense prologue! This certainly persuades me to read the full story when it comes out! You certainly know how to write, my dear! You immediately suck the readers ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Cursed Gemini-Prologue

    Wow. This was a very powerful and emotional prologue. I can tell the main character has been through a lot. When the story is made, I would love to read ...

    Nov 29, 2015


Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri