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Re: Carpe Diem
Hey! This is just a review from your friendly neighborhood tired nineteen year old. Let's get started, shall we? First of all, I love the aesthetic of this poem - ...
Nov 20, 2022 -
Re: The Final Straw
Oooh. This is really interesting. The first thing I would like to point out, and what is personally one of my favorite aspects of this poem is the font. It ...
Nov 20, 2022 -
Re: Mr. Mayor
This is so freaking interesting - it reminds me of old-styled newspaper articles about wanted people, or perhaps a radio ad detailing the characteristics of a missing person. But I ...
Nov 9, 2022 -
Re: Conversations Meant To Be Forgotten
First of all, let me congratulate you on writing what seems to be your first piece(?), and take a moment to marvel at the way this poem is formatted - ...
Nov 8, 2022 -
Re: Sorrows of the Deep
Okay, so first of all, I love mermaid tales, and this definitely delivered! A gothic horror, yes please! I do have a few questions, more so than critiques. What is ...
Nov 7, 2022 -
Re: C-L-O-W-N (All my friends play pretend)
This has a really..I mean, I don't know how to describe it right now, so give me a second to collect my thoughts. I think this kind of sounds like ...
Nov 7, 2022 -
Re: The Last Train
Woah, this is short, but a lot to unpack. First, I would like to remark on the rhythm it has to it - it's almost like a limerick, or a ...
Nov 2, 2022 -
Re: Keep walking
I love how simple this starts out, but slowly grows to be more complex as time goes on. I think it is the perfect way to reflect the passage of ...
Nov 1, 2022 -
Re: that night
This is probably just a stylistic thing, but I want to point out the spacing of this poem. I feel like a main theme is losing yourself and the spacing ...
Oct 31, 2022 -
Re: jupiter wishes
This isn't really a review-review, if you catch my drift. I just truly admire the way you wrote this, and it's clear to see that it's maybe not a romantic ...
Oct 29, 2022 -
Re: The Wittebane Brother
I've only watched a little bit of TOH (it's not really my jam), but this is fantastically written. There's almost a lyrical beat to it, like a limerick, or a ...
Oct 28, 2022
