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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Carpe Diem

    Hey! This is just a review from your friendly neighborhood tired nineteen year old. Let's get started, shall we? First of all, I love the aesthetic of this poem - ...

    Nov 20, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Final Straw

    Oooh. This is really interesting. The first thing I would like to point out, and what is personally one of my favorite aspects of this poem is the font. It ...

    Nov 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Politics, Satire Re: Mr. Mayor

    This is so freaking interesting - it reminds me of old-styled newspaper articles about wanted people, or perhaps a radio ad detailing the characteristics of a missing person. But I ...

    Nov 9, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Conversations Meant To Be Forgotten

    First of all, let me congratulate you on writing what seems to be your first piece(?), and take a moment to marvel at the way this poem is formatted - ...

    Nov 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Sorrows of the Deep

    Okay, so first of all, I love mermaid tales, and this definitely delivered! A gothic horror, yes please! I do have a few questions, more so than critiques. What is ...

    Nov 7, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Lyrical Re: C-L-O-W-N (All my friends play pretend)

    This has a really..I mean, I don't know how to describe it right now, so give me a second to collect my thoughts. I think this kind of sounds like ...

    Nov 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Last Train

    Woah, this is short, but a lot to unpack. First, I would like to remark on the rhythm it has to it - it's almost like a limerick, or a ...

    Nov 2, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Keep walking

    I love how simple this starts out, but slowly grows to be more complex as time goes on. I think it is the perfect way to reflect the passage of ...

    Nov 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: that night

    This is probably just a stylistic thing, but I want to point out the spacing of this poem. I feel like a main theme is losing yourself and the spacing ...

    Oct 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: jupiter wishes

    This isn't really a review-review, if you catch my drift. I just truly admire the way you wrote this, and it's clear to see that it's maybe not a romantic ...

    Oct 29, 2022
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Wittebane Brother

    I've only watched a little bit of TOH (it's not really my jam), but this is fantastically written. There's almost a lyrical beat to it, like a limerick, or a ...

    Oct 28, 2022


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