crescent

You craft the story in a very distinct way, and it's an easy read. I like how you gave the "gods" funny names. I could see you turning this into ...

This is quite an interesting beginning to a novel. I like how action-packed it is. You write quite well, and you have very few grammatical errors. I do hope you ...

I'm not one who is able to distinguish good poetry from bad poetry, but I really liked this. The words flowed smoothly in my head when I read them. You ...

I like this a lot actually. Out of curiosity, why did you make this take place in the future though? I read the second chapter first and I can't wait ...

Prolo gu e My name is Violet Ames, I' m seventeen years old and ever since the day I was made my world revolved around three words : caspers, whisperers, ...

Your poem confused me. Perhaps I don't know all the references. e.g. what the meaning of "is" is. Is it supposed to be symbolic, because you mention it again in ...

I like how you wrote your poem entirely in questions. :D It gives the reader some leeway and keeps them interested. Interaction with the reader is always good. It was ...

GAHHHH!!! The random adjectives and words feel like odd pieces of a jigsaw puzzle trying to jam themselves into the picture. e.g. "It was murderous and animated."

Hi. I felt this was a bit rushed. I was a bit confused because I thought Rylee wanted to die or kill the MC at first. I found parts of ...

This seems A LOT like "Zombieland", especially with the rules thing you have going on or have at least begun with. You may want to finish writing your piece before ...

Personally, I feel this song is a bit cliche, which is okay unless you want to be completely original. The title is a Taylor Swift song title and some of ...

I thought of Dear John when I read this. I like it too. xP It has a suprise twist at the end. I'd just like to point out that in ...

It was a surprising twist. I didn't expect Ellie to be a vampire and for the guy to be the victim at all. I think it's fine to have the ...

I was not impressed. I don't care if you are dyslexic, you can use Microsoft Word to eliminate many of your grammatical and spelling errors. The storyline wasn't bad, but ...

I'm slightly confused. Are they all cats? From my reading it seemed like Opal is a cat because of the mention of her unusual fur color, but are the brothers ...