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It sounds like you're going though a tough time. Comments: Death can be really depressing. People die everyday like you said, even people like unborn babies. Did you know 3500 ...

*Likes*. This was really interesting. You showed me a whole other perspective of Alice in Wonderland. Maybe Alice really just made this all up because she didn't want to face ...

Hi. My name is Crescent. I shall be possibly your first reviewer for this piece. :) I liked the plot but the errors were a bit distracting. You kept on ...

This isn't making much sense to me, but it's not scaring me either... People with guns. I think you should of started me off with the first scene... What's Tripolis ...

I liked this one. It was short but it portrayed a huge amount of emotion, story, life, in a couple of paragraphs. It was mysterious and intriguing. I just found ...

Hi Pacific. Here's my opinion. It seems like each of your poems could be a tad bit longer. Extend the story. :) It'll be something beautiful. From my perspective, it ...

*Likes* It's featured again!!! Now you can't complain, Kim. :smt003 lol. I don't know how to review the poetry but I liked how the questions formed a story and how ...

This one gave me chills. Is the girl a vampire? It was really good too. I know why I'm down here , I know what I've done, but baby your ...

I liked this poem too. I'm sensing this mysterious element in your poetry. It makes me ponder on the meaning. (It's a complement. :) ) My favourite lines were It ...

Wow! That was captivating. I read the poem a couple of times. Is it talking about a break up? (Just curious, not to pry or anything.) I really liked it. ...

I liked it. It had so much emotion in it, very desciptive. I can feel the frustration. 8 letters, 3 words, 1 meaning. I love the first line. I counted ...

I love Romeo/Juliet rewrittings. I really hope you'll continue writing this. *Likes* I can't wait to see who Romeo's other love is and how this will all turn out. Can ...

Its so pretty. I really liked it. Welcome to YWS by the way. I'm not exactly sure how to review poetry... Here's all I found. close so i can see ...

I don't know how to review poetry or even the different types of poetry, but I like this piece. It doesn't rhyme, but it's relatable and all poetry doesn't rhyme ...

:lol: Okay, so I read this chapter late at night then I had a dream about it but it was in modern times... The Chapter was awesome as usual :) ...