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Re: Toxic World
This is a lovely poem! I love how detailed and descriptive it is,especially when you talk about how toxic this world is and how we should love and not judge.This ...
Oct 16, 2021 -
Re: Burn
I enjoyed reading this poem,about burning.Though it’s short,it does have an important meaning to it.Sometimes,we’d achieve so much,it will consume us and no longer feel like will feel like we ...
Oct 14, 2021 -
Re: (Tea candle)
I loved this poem.You’re using personification.You’re giving the tea candle life.It’s keeping out the darkness in the narrator’s life,that small candle’s light is giving the narrator hope.I
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: Poem "Existence"
Lovely poem! Short,but teaches us to enjoy life as much as we can,because we’ll never know when it will be taken from us.It’s not too long,it’s just simple,which I feel ...
Oct 12, 2021 -
Re: [To the shoreline]
I thought this poem was interesting.I believe it’s about a guy being lost in life,then,finding someone,a woman in his life,who would lead him to the right direction in finding himself.I ...
Oct 11, 2021 -
Re: My realization
I enjoyed this poem.I believe lots of people,myself included,have felt out of control with the world,as if we could never truly have our own say,no matter how hard we favorite ...
Oct 10, 2021 -
Re: Musings from a Music Festival
This had an interesting title:”Musings from a music festival.” The poem itself was interesting,too.Short,but favorite parts in the poem would have to be:”The purest of humanity there is.” Thes
Oct 9, 2021 -
Re: Lizard
This is a short poem,but it has meaning to it.I believe the narrator was someone important in their life,but that other person was being a “lizard” and pushing the narrator ...
Oct 8, 2021 -
Re: Infancy
This poem about infancy was interesting to first,I thought it was about a baby and their mother,but now,I feel like it’s about someone who was hurt so badly that they ...
Oct 7, 2021 -
Re: the inevitable
This is exciting.Whatever the narrator must be feeling,they are experiencing a great loss.Great details of the narrator’s suffering are the lines:”A plethora of painful emotions” and “of burnt
Oct 6, 2021 -
Re: The Afterlife
Wow! I want to hear more about the adventures of this man and what he does with his he forced to haunt his house or did he haunt it out ...
Oct 5, 2021 -
Re: October poem, don't really have a name yet (TW: ghosts)
Cool poem.I feel like this has something more to it than Halloween.I wonder what kind of person this narrator is to have past problems and associate them with favorite parts ...
Oct 3, 2021 -
Re: go enjoy your life
It’s short,but sweet.I like this poem.It’s telling us to go and enjoy your favorite lines in the poem is when you tell us,the readers,that we are beautiful.A simple compliment can ...
Oct 2, 2021 -
Re: Kendyll Nurse
This is a cool description for a character.I’m excited to see the adventures this girl goes on.Yes,pets always on first before boys,that’s true.She sounds realistic and that’s good.She’s like
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Captain Cheat
This is an exciting story.I can’t wait to see if this becomes a was interesting to see the characters get irritated by each other after playing one match.Will this blow ...
Sep 30, 2021
