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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A Tisket, A Tasket

    hmm...Suspenseful,interesting story here.I'm not sure if the protagonist is a hero or a villain.Maybe they're both.Who knows? I wonder what the story is it about someone who murders people that ...

    Sep 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Terra

    Mesmerizing poem.I love how you describe the sky as a place "Where the view never ends." It makes it seem like there is a whole world in the sky that ...

    Sep 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Stage Fright

    I enjoyed this poem.I love how in the end,when the person leaves,they felt as if they were being shows how damaged they are on the inside for being on a ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Blue

    I enjoyed this poem talking about the color blue and how it could be more than just a color.It's lovely and poetic! My favorite parts were these lines:"Blue is the ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To See You Again

    Cool poem.I like how the character reminiscences about the past and how things were easier back then.We all want to go back to when things were favorite parts are these ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Art » Lyrical, Other Re: Not here for now

    Good tells us,the readers,that the devil isn't evil and probably never even was.He only wants us to live favorite parts were these lines:"Oh,I lived life wrongly.Only thing I achieved was ...

    Sep 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: PHOENIX

    This was a cool poem.I like Phoenixs,because they rise from the ashes and this poem captured the meaning and magic of The Phoenix favorite part in the poem is the ...

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: on ambivalence

    Interesting poem.I liked how you wrote sounds like it could have many different meanings,but you don't tell us what those meanings is for us to figure out and I love ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A genius's encyclopaedic answer sheet

    It's a cool poem.The student sounds like they are giving the teacher a hard time,but yet,the answers that the student is giving are intelligent,because they know the answers,but want to ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Satire Re: Automotomophobia

    Wow! This was magical and poetic! My favorite part is how the character starts off sad when looking at the puppets,but looks back and feels whole again.I loved this lesson ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It’s just a day

    Cool was short,but sweet.I love how you mention that anyone's feelings for someone can come out at any moment,in any conversation.Even if it's just about "The Russian revolution and pickled ...

    Aug 31, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Time Giant

    Ooh..This is a very thought-provoking us,the readers,wondering about the meaning of life.This reminds me of the movie:"Alice through the looking glass" and I love that! My favorite part was when ...

    Aug 30, 2021
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Maybell

    I have to say,this was a very interesting story! Even as I got to the end of the story,I still had so many questions! What was going on with the ...

    Aug 29, 2021
  • Short Story » Satire, Teen Fiction Re: Don´t Touch My Milk You Fiend.

    This was hilarious and fun! I enjoyed reading favorite part was when the narrator got annoyed at their roommate for drinking their milk,which caused the main character to murder the ...

    Aug 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fairy Tales: 7-9

    I enjoyed reading these stories.I thought they were very original and favorite story was the one about the three Queens.That story was powerful and showed us,the readers,what happens when the ...

    Aug 27, 2021


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon