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Re: Potterer
I liked this poem.I can see why one would fear to have such a power,the power of creation.While you can create wonderful masterpieces with this power,you could also cause a ...
Nov 14, 2021 -
Re: Manic Pixie
Lovely poem! It sounded just like a children’s fairytale.The fact that the poem says that pixies can be broken,shared and put into jars,says what the narrator thinks about pixies.Maybe,pixies are ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: What Does it Mean to Dream
What does it mean to dream and to live? Those are both good questions that could have different answers,neither of them wrong.These are my answers,someone else may think dream is ...
Nov 12, 2021 -
Re: motion picture ghosts and other pleasantries
This was an interesting poem.I don’t think that this is a romance poem.I feel like the narrator believes it’s romance and love,but it’s far from it.The narrator feels protective to ...
Nov 11, 2021 -
Re: My Sunflower
I loved this short story! It was so cute and beautiful! I’m glad they ended up together! I also loved the descriptions you provided for the characters,especially the “starry-eyed girl” ...
Nov 10, 2021 -
Re: hot Chocolate
Cool little story about hot chocolate! First of all,I want to say that looks like a delicious cup of hot chocolate.Second,the details here are clear and precise.You were listing many ...
Nov 9, 2021 -
Re: i am always writing about stars
This was short,but it was nice to read.I liked it.I believe that this poem is about someone who is troubled and anxious,yet,they don’t want help,because their loneliness inspires their creativity.If
Nov 8, 2021 -
Re: A letter to the devil
This was a fun poem to read.Yes,we do blame the devil for most of our problems,but what is the devil’s story? What does he have to say? We ask ourselves ...
Nov 7, 2021 -
Re: The Barnacles on a Whale
Such a sad and emotional poem to read.I can’t imagine how upset and devastated the mother must have felt to leave her child and knowing that she’ll never see her ...
Nov 6, 2021 -
Re: hometown anarchy
I enjoyed reading this poem.This talks about how people can be forgotten from the world,fading away into nothingness.Everyone wants to be heard,but not everyone is heard.People are lost and are ...
Nov 5, 2021 -
Re: if i am human, i am one of the worst
Ooh..I liked this teaches us that we have so much we need to learn about life in general,it tells us that we need a greater understanding of the world and ...
Nov 4, 2021 -
Re: Pieces
I liked reading this poem! It’s relatable.Sometimes,we all feel like we’re going to break into pieces with the expectations the world puts on us,even if we keep on trying.We’ll still ...
Nov 3, 2021 -
Re: I am a Rose
This is a lovely little story from the perspective of a rose.This rose holds so many wishes and hopes for love,but it’s all drained and there is nothing left.The rose ...
Nov 2, 2021 -
Re: twin waves
I like this collaboration! The two poems put together sound wonderful.I love the lines:”I want a better life and so I’m cast away.” The narrator gets pushed away from a ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: dandelion scream
This was a nice short poem I read.”Dandelions screaming”…is that supposed to represent the people in this world who ask-scream-for help,but never get any? Because people wish on dandelions,pluck
Oct 31, 2021
