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  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: A Sad Poem of References

    I couldn’t decode where the quotes came from,but I think the one about great power coming with great responsibility is from “The Avengers“ and is said by Thor.I could be ...

    Dec 25, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Winter Love

    Oooh! Cute and nice winter poem to read on Christmas Eve.It’s got a nice message to it.Love will blossom like Winter and if it’s good and true,it will last for ...

    Dec 24, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: A Reindeer Adventure

    Ooooh! Lovely poem to read before Christmas! It was so whimsical and fun,I picture this as a Christmas special.Bernadette and Hershell's friendship was adorable and I loved how you added ...

    Dec 23, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: he who hath...

    I like this poem.Yes,love can give us these feelings.It’s very true.Now,I have to say,I loved the descriptions! It was well-detailed,I coukd picture it in my mind.The metophorical flames,the desire.

    Dec 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I breathe brazenly

    I have enjoyed reading this poem.I have to say,it was very descriptive! When you describe the ants crawling around the narrator’s toes and the wind playing with the narrator’s hair.I ...

    Dec 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: An ode to love lost

    I have enjoyed reading this poem about lost love.We can love so hard,we forget what’s rational.We end up doing things based on that love and it can do more harm ...

    Dec 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Technology, Narrative Re: fuel economy

    Yes,this poem could be relatable.We don’t want to spend our time thinking about our feelings,we don’t have time for ourselves.Why is that? Because we’re so focused on getting stuff done,we ...

    Dec 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: and the tides wash out traces of us

    I enjoyed this poem.Yes,we’re afraid of being forgotten,everyone is,but some things are better left unsaid.Like the love that grows between people that warms them from one else needs to know ...

    Dec 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To catch a sunrise.

    I loved reading this poem.I wonder,is this about saying goodbye to love? Or,if the words “Goodbye” and “love” were people in a relationship and goodbye was thinking of a breakup,because ...

    Dec 17, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: liberation

    I like this poem.Too often,we feel the need to relax and go to our imagination,to take a break from reality.This poem was lovely to read.I like how you ask if ...

    Dec 16, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Vending Machine

    Oh wow…what an interesting story…I wonder if Maria will turn into vending machine food.Did she become the vending machine? How is it cursed? Who cursed it? Did someone or something ...

    Dec 16, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Meditation as a Conversation

    Ah yes,meditation.Not many of us have time for meditation,with everything that happens in our lives.If we see meditation as something necessary,like a meeting,then we’ll have time for it.I loved rea

    Dec 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Born by the Spindle

    I enjoyed this poem.I like how it talks about how we all want something in our lives,but never take time to enjoy it.We’re always craving for something faster and better.We ...

    Dec 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Water Poems: Mind-map (or Things a River Asks)

    I like this poem and how the river is personified.I believe that this poem is talking about the wishes of a river and wanting to be praised as much as ...

    Dec 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Last Day of Autumn

    This was a very nice and lovely poem about autumn.The part where you mentioned that you were inspired to write this poem just by looking out the the train window ...

    Dec 11, 2021


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