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Re: The Court Jester and the Baker Boy
Splendid storytelling! The baker and Court Jester sure aren’t the King’s perfect little subjects.I wonder if something more will bloom from this romance.This was so lovely to read! It really ...
Jun 29, 2022 -
Re: The Last of The Ivory Days
The very last days of blissfulness.The last of the ivory days as the poem says.It’s too late to run from fate.That’s just what is the inevitable darkness that is to ...
Jun 29, 2022 -
Re: Deluge
Yes! Someone else who likes the rain! This felt like a tide of negative thoughts until the sweet yet salty rain washed it all often feels like the world is ...
Jun 27, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark Wood
Did it make me laugh? No because it takes a lot to get a laugh out of me XD.Does this feel like a poem? My answer is the same as ...
Jun 26, 2022 -
Re: Him
She loves him,yet she can’t have him.He doesn’t even know she exists.He’s only a fleeting stranger and then he leaves.If only they know each other,maybe then they love can be ...
Jun 26, 2022 -
Re: carousel
Oooh..This was so full of the love and carnival magic! A carousel of toxic love.A tide of saccharine overdose of chocolate hearts.The hearts don’t even taste sweet anymore.They’re just pain ...
Jun 24, 2022 -
Re: And at Midnight.
This sounds like an interesting dream you had.I like all the sensory details in the poem.They make it really fun and imaginative.I liked it when the birds flew to the ...
Jun 23, 2022 -
Re: The Holy Ghost spell !!
Huh.I never read anything like this.It’s nice.We all want to do something in life.We all want to make an impact.The question is:Do we have it in us? I also liked ...
Jun 22, 2022 -
Re: Wings
I take it that this is about a part of you that you love,if not your true self,that you hide from the world in fear of what they would all ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: Springtime
During the Spring as the flowers bloom so does love.We have crushes,we see a fleeting human and already love them to death.We wish for these passings of kind looks to ...
Jun 20, 2022 -
Re: I Hate You
This poem gave off a romantic and sad vibe.I like it when romance and sadness are put matter what happens the love will never be reached.It’s a tragic truth for ...
Jun 19, 2022 -
Re: The Path of Youth
There’s always a choice.A safe choice and a dangerous choice.Should we make the safe choice or the dangerous one? Which one is the right one? Which one is the wise ...
Jun 18, 2022 -
Re: the witch who saw herself as queen
This is a cute and nice fantasy poem! Was the witch a Queen? Who knows? All we know is that her one son cared for her.Even when she was at ...
Jun 18, 2022 -
Re: Mourn Me Not
This is a fun poem! I like how it gives off the feeling of victory and hope.Like no matter what happens there will still be hope for a better future.There’s ...
Jun 16, 2022 -
Re: Selfish vs. Selfless
Wow..That was..beautiful.I think the biggest enemy in the world is society.Society gives the idea of someone who is “completely evil” or “completely good.” Those standards are unrealistic and
Jun 15, 2022
