Wow, very enigmatic. I love it.
I just saw your message.
I like the formatting, putting the last word by itself, and making a meta ABBCB formatting with the stanzas instead of the lines.
Which one is praised, did you take the new path, and your heart longs to return to the other? I think I prefer this interpretation, so I’ll roll with it.
Most of your poems have vivid sensory details, and I highly recommend keeping that up, especially when writing something about so broad a topic. It will help us to understand and will unlock in ourselves the feelings that you are trying to express.
Otherwise, excellent work, I love reading from you, Alice.
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