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Re: Him
She loves him,yet she can’t have him.He doesn’t even know she exists.He’s only a fleeting stranger and then he leaves.If only they know each other,maybe then they love can be ...
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Re: carousel
Oooh..This was so full of the love and carnival magic! A carousel of toxic love.A tide of saccharine overdose of chocolate hearts.The hearts don’t even taste sweet anymore.They’re just pain ...
Jun 24, 2022 -
Re: And at Midnight.
This sounds like an interesting dream you had.I like all the sensory details in the poem.They make it really fun and imaginative.I liked it when the birds flew to the ...
Jun 23, 2022 -
Re: The Holy Ghost spell !!
Huh.I never read anything like this.It’s nice.We all want to do something in life.We all want to make an impact.The question is:Do we have it in us? I also liked ...
Jun 22, 2022 -
Re: Wings
I take it that this is about a part of you that you love,if not your true self,that you hide from the world in fear of what they would all ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: Springtime
During the Spring as the flowers bloom so does love.We have crushes,we see a fleeting human and already love them to death.We wish for these passings of kind looks to ...
Jun 20, 2022 -
Re: I Hate You
This poem gave off a romantic and sad vibe.I like it when romance and sadness are put matter what happens the love will never be reached.It’s a tragic truth for ...
Jun 19, 2022 -
Re: The Path of Youth
There’s always a choice.A safe choice and a dangerous choice.Should we make the safe choice or the dangerous one? Which one is the right one? Which one is the wise ...
Jun 18, 2022 -
Re: the witch who saw herself as queen
This is a cute and nice fantasy poem! Was the witch a Queen? Who knows? All we know is that her one son cared for her.Even when she was at ...
Jun 18, 2022 -
Re: Mourn Me Not
This is a fun poem! I like how it gives off the feeling of victory and hope.Like no matter what happens there will still be hope for a better future.There’s ...
Jun 16, 2022 -
Re: Selfish vs. Selfless
Wow..That was..beautiful.I think the biggest enemy in the world is society.Society gives the idea of someone who is “completely evil” or “completely good.” Those standards are unrealistic and
Jun 15, 2022 -
Re: Paradise
No one stops to think that maybe the woman doesn’t want the baby.Or that the baby didn’t come from love.Or that the person carrying the baby wasn’t a woman but ...
Jun 14, 2022 -
Re: Words With Friends (2) Bots
The curse of not finding worthy opponents! Never being able to earn a win day in and day out.The same thing.Will there ever be a time the challenge is done ...
Jun 13, 2022 -
Re: Rote Learning
We find comfort in the chaos.We won’t be blamed for causing it.If we are in the red then we can just come up with excuses.This makes me think it is ...
Jun 12, 2022 -
Re: The Body On the Ceiling
This is like a well written Creepypasta! Is this supposed to be a Creepypasta? Do you know what a Creepypasta is? It’s anything disturbing on the internet from stories like ...
Jun 11, 2022
