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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Snow In New East World

    seems like pieces of the sun are falling off and turning into snowflakes.These snowflakes aren’t ordinary snowflakes.They evaporate straight through your tongue, leaving you to taste your own tissue

    Jul 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Cross Your Heart, Hope We Don't Die - A Stranger Things AU Fanfiction

    As soon as I saw that it was a Stranger Things fanfiction I knew what I had to do:Read it, of course! From what I read, it looks like Eddie ...

    Jul 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Veni, Vidi, Vici

    I knew Regulus Black was from Harry Potter,but I didn’t know much about him till I went on Google.I guess that says something about who he is,eh? The only people ...

    Jul 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Abstract Love

    Welcome to YWS! Can I just say that I like how you put them close together? I’m not sure if that was intentional,but it looks like someone’s cascading and complicated ...

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter

    Hmph.I don’t know is this was the meaning you were trying to convey,but here’s what I got:The person just wants to carry these weights off their back and take a ...

    Jul 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Prince Charming

    You aren’t perfect.You are flawed as is everyone.Prince Charming is our want but also our fear.I like the idea of Prince Charming you presented! It is so true! I feel ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Other Re: Breathe

    And just like the people in the poem,I am intrigued! Who are they? What world do they live in? What are they? Guess we shall see.Just one sign telling them ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: To A Boy I Saw in the Supermarket Once

    Sometimes you can really like someone even if only for a fleeting this case,it’s towards a boy at the supermarket.The imagery you used is just WOW.Like I could never.Loved how ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Why Do We Hate Ourselves?

    People’s words can really get to us.They can damage our well-being and hurt our soul.If you can find positivity in the little things you’re good.It’s not natural to be happy ...

    Jul 21, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: So you drive a BMW?

    Well! That’s one way to get the girl! How funny! He doesn’t even own those cars but the other guy doesn’t know that! I also thought this was a cute ...

    Jul 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ransom

    Trapped in a chokehold “relationship” keeping you imprisoned till you can’t feel anything.You forget yourself.You forget your purpose.You sink to the ground in despair surrounded by your remains

    Jul 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Dream of Night

    This person has many dreams that have become unreachable.They flicker in the darkness of night but are determined to stay bright.Determined to dance in the shadows and make the most ...

    Jul 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dreams

    Wow! It’s like I can hear the clock ticking her life away.With each year,each demand,each ticking of the clock,a piece of her dies until there’s nothing at all.Until she simply ...

    Jul 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eyes coal

    My thoughts on this poem: (It might be wrong.) The person narrating had been broken by a toxic relationship that had a lot of tears , fighting and running back ...

    Jul 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shatter Me

    Still stand tall after the hurt that has pierced your soul but hasn’t stopped it.The thorns that prick your eyes but don’t cloud your vision.You might have been broken but ...

    Jul 15, 2022


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