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Re: Snow In New East World
seems like pieces of the sun are falling off and turning into snowflakes.These snowflakes aren’t ordinary snowflakes.They evaporate straight through your tongue, leaving you to taste your own tissue
Jul 29, 2022 -
Re: Cross Your Heart, Hope We Don't Die - A Stranger Things AU Fanfiction
As soon as I saw that it was a Stranger Things fanfiction I knew what I had to do:Read it, of course! From what I read, it looks like Eddie ...
Jul 28, 2022 -
Re: Veni, Vidi, Vici
I knew Regulus Black was from Harry Potter,but I didn’t know much about him till I went on Google.I guess that says something about who he is,eh? The only people ...
Jul 27, 2022 -
Re: Abstract Love
Welcome to YWS! Can I just say that I like how you put them close together? I’m not sure if that was intentional,but it looks like someone’s cascading and complicated ...
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter
Hmph.I don’t know is this was the meaning you were trying to convey,but here’s what I got:The person just wants to carry these weights off their back and take a ...
Jul 25, 2022 -
Re: Prince Charming
You aren’t perfect.You are flawed as is everyone.Prince Charming is our want but also our fear.I like the idea of Prince Charming you presented! It is so true! I feel ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: Breathe
And just like the people in the poem,I am intrigued! Who are they? What world do they live in? What are they? Guess we shall see.Just one sign telling them ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: To A Boy I Saw in the Supermarket Once
Sometimes you can really like someone even if only for a fleeting this case,it’s towards a boy at the supermarket.The imagery you used is just WOW.Like I could never.Loved how ...
Jul 22, 2022 -
Re: Why Do We Hate Ourselves?
People’s words can really get to us.They can damage our well-being and hurt our soul.If you can find positivity in the little things you’re good.It’s not natural to be happy ...
Jul 21, 2022 -
Re: So you drive a BMW?
Well! That’s one way to get the girl! How funny! He doesn’t even own those cars but the other guy doesn’t know that! I also thought this was a cute ...
Jul 20, 2022 -
Re: Ransom
Trapped in a chokehold “relationship” keeping you imprisoned till you can’t feel anything.You forget yourself.You forget your purpose.You sink to the ground in despair surrounded by your remains
Jul 19, 2022 -
Re: The Dream of Night
This person has many dreams that have become unreachable.They flicker in the darkness of night but are determined to stay bright.Determined to dance in the shadows and make the most ...
Jul 18, 2022 -
Re: Dreams
Wow! It’s like I can hear the clock ticking her life away.With each year,each demand,each ticking of the clock,a piece of her dies until there’s nothing at all.Until she simply ...
Jul 18, 2022 -
Re: Eyes coal
My thoughts on this poem: (It might be wrong.) The person narrating had been broken by a toxic relationship that had a lot of tears , fighting and running back ...
Jul 16, 2022 -
Re: Shatter Me
Still stand tall after the hurt that has pierced your soul but hasn’t stopped it.The thorns that prick your eyes but don’t cloud your vision.You might have been broken but ...
Jul 15, 2022
