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Re: Part of You
I would imagine that this poem is about these thoughts that grip at you and haunt you.You’re unable to talk about them and get them off your one seems to ...
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: Hands that Don't Love
I was trying to figure out the meaning of the poem, so I read some of the other reviews. I don’t know if this comes close, but on another writing ...
Aug 27, 2022 -
Re: Roll in the Grass and Stare at the Sky
Growing up is exciting and fun-but also utterly terrifying.I like how you described it using the unpredictable,beautiful, and frightening woods, because it certainly isn’t a walk in the park.You wil
Aug 27, 2022 -
Re: Goodbye, Precious Gold
The illusions people can give.The ideas someone screws into our heads that corrupt us.The very fantasy they call “love” , only to be broken if we choose to break free.Only ...
Aug 25, 2022 -
Re: notes app apology
I can imagine someone thinking over a text and then not sending one, because it doesn’t feel right.Everything just feels so cold and wrong and different.There’s so much to say, ...
Aug 25, 2022 -
Re: hot cicada summer
It’s the feeling of not belonging somewhere.Of feeling like an alien.I liked that there was no sets the feel of that loneliness in a crowd.Of sticking out.This poem could also ...
Aug 23, 2022 -
Re: "Let it Load"
I know this is old but I’m going to review anyway.First of all, this will always be matter the era, we’ll always search up anything that comes to mind. Second ...
Aug 22, 2022 -
Re: somewhere, folded in under the horizon
I will try and interpret the poems.The first one is about depression, the second one is about finding positivity (the horizon) in life (the destination). The third one is about ...
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: Writers Block
I hate when this happens.Right when I have a good idea and I’m all excited about it, everything only goes downhill from there.I suddenly have no idea what I’ve just ...
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God
Hilarious! I liked it. It reminds me of when I was writing my story “Eloise-the demented doll woman” (which you can check out on my profile) and how I was ...
Aug 19, 2022 -
Re: The Wrong Cheese
Goodness! Poor Heather! All she wanted was Red Leicester cheese.She got every kind of cheese imaginable but not the one she wanted.I never tried Red Leicester favorite is Brie, but ...
Aug 18, 2022 -
Re: Transcript of an Encounter with a Mighty Green Beast in the Green Room
I couldn’t stop laughing. I’m imagining Green room works as beasts. I’m sure you have a lot of slaying (I mean reviewing) to do in the Green room, because there ...
Aug 18, 2022 -
Re: Dementis: Chapter 1
Hmm..I could be wrong, but I have a feeling Kaya isn’t crazy. Maybe she was in the wrong place at the wrong time and that’s how she ended up in ...
Aug 16, 2022 -
Re: You should totes ignore this.
I’m going to read your other works.But for now, I’ll review this. Why? Because I can! First of all, this was incredibly breathtaking. This sentence is so meaningful and powerful. ...
Aug 15, 2022 -
Re: Imagined Impossibilities
I think you are using flower imagery to show that even beautiful things like flowers dry out and die.I would say that I emphasize with the speaker because I feel ...
Aug 15, 2022
