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  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter

    Hmph.I don’t know is this was the meaning you were trying to convey,but here’s what I got:The person just wants to carry these weights off their back and take a ...

    Jul 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Prince Charming

    You aren’t perfect.You are flawed as is everyone.Prince Charming is our want but also our fear.I like the idea of Prince Charming you presented! It is so true! I feel ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Other Re: Breathe

    And just like the people in the poem,I am intrigued! Who are they? What world do they live in? What are they? Guess we shall see.Just one sign telling them ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: To A Boy I Saw in the Supermarket Once

    Sometimes you can really like someone even if only for a fleeting this case,it’s towards a boy at the supermarket.The imagery you used is just WOW.Like I could never.Loved how ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Why Do We Hate Ourselves?

    People’s words can really get to us.They can damage our well-being and hurt our soul.If you can find positivity in the little things you’re good.It’s not natural to be happy ...

    Jul 21, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: So you drive a BMW?

    Well! That’s one way to get the girl! How funny! He doesn’t even own those cars but the other guy doesn’t know that! I also thought this was a cute ...

    Jul 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ransom

    Trapped in a chokehold “relationship” keeping you imprisoned till you can’t feel anything.You forget yourself.You forget your purpose.You sink to the ground in despair surrounded by your remains

    Jul 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Dream of Night

    This person has many dreams that have become unreachable.They flicker in the darkness of night but are determined to stay bright.Determined to dance in the shadows and make the most ...

    Jul 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dreams

    Wow! It’s like I can hear the clock ticking her life away.With each year,each demand,each ticking of the clock,a piece of her dies until there’s nothing at all.Until she simply ...

    Jul 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eyes coal

    My thoughts on this poem: (It might be wrong.) The person narrating had been broken by a toxic relationship that had a lot of tears , fighting and running back ...

    Jul 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shatter Me

    Still stand tall after the hurt that has pierced your soul but hasn’t stopped it.The thorns that prick your eyes but don’t cloud your vision.You might have been broken but ...

    Jul 15, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i don't have to be your true north anymore.

    This sounds like someone who has come out of a toxic relationship victoriously.Like they have decided to leave it for good and never ever come back to that.Rising from the ...

    Jul 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Technology, Culture Re: click

    Goodness! That is so true! If I have to see another post talking about how “perfect” they are for each other,I’m going to throw up.Real life isn’t a fairy tale.It’s ...

    Jul 13, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Apostle

    What a wholesome poem! I think that it’s about having hope and faith in a world of neglect and one wants to help each other or have a simple conversation ...

    Jul 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: colors of life

    The colors of life shine for all of us.They all mean different things to us.The colors make us happy and help us sing our way into the world.We dance and ...

    Jul 11, 2022


Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere.
— Martin Luther King Jr.