Gem climbing out of her Jewelrybox for a short review here!
I love this beautiful poem. You did a great job.
The middle pf the poem and the first bit are a little less connected then they could be. The whole time I felt like I missed some connecting point but the rest made sense together, it just feels like you accidentally skipped a sentence.
All and all I really loved your poem though. I love your dramatic tone in the poem your authors vocalization because it need to be dramatic it is dramatic it has feeling. It is this persons life. I love that, that is feeling we can relate too.
Though you could do with a slightly different stanza approach, this one doesn't give this poem the affect I think it deserves.
Have a great day and continue writing.
With that Gem climbs back into here Jewelrybox until next time.
Points: 7
Reviews: 29
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