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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Accidental Magic: Chapter 4

    Hmm…Who is thinking about making people pay? The Queen? Is the Queen a villain? Could it be Maddie? Or that witch girl Ellie met? The witch girl seems okay, but ...

    Jan 24, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Accidental Magic: Chapter three

    Maybe Sam was supposed to get powers. He doesn’t seem to care though. If they aren’t allowed to use magic because it will make them evil, then why are they ...

    Jan 23, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Accidental Magic: chapter two

    Ah…so I’m guessing that Ellie was supposed to get magic. I wonder who the ghosts are. Could they have been the ghosts of past kids who weren’t supposed to get ...

    Jan 22, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The accidental magic: chapter one

    Oh no…something is gonna happen with them. Either the girls are going to work together to fight the ghosts, the ghosts are friendly and trying to protect them from a ...

    Jan 21, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friend

    Yee this is so sweet. :D Friends really are an important and wonderful factor. I like how you described a friend knowing more than an Aunt, because truthfully one would ...

    Jan 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Once Was An Angel

    I love this poem! Yes, circumstance doesn’t matter. What matters is the person’s character and how they’ll handle the situation. Despite everything, the man decided to be as good a ...

    Jan 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Unlearn

    I like the picture. Where did you find the image? I think that this poem is about the need to unlearn what society teaches us. We’re taught to look into ...

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    Thank goodness stairs aren’t sentient, or else they would experience great pain and we would be in a lot of trouble. Could stairs lead a revolution? I don’t want to ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Satire, Humor Re: Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer Makes No Sense if You Think About It

    Well, I’m certainly glad that I read this essayn’t. While staying humorous, you do bring up some valid points. I do agree with your thoughts on the misfits. I think ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky of Imagination washed away

    Growing up is sad and facing reality is depressing. Everything we’ve ever imagined fades away. But we can find happiness in growing up. Of course it will never be the ...

    Jan 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Poetry Compilation #3

    I love how this feels like a fairytale. It’s so interesting to read. It reminds me of Dungeons and Dragons. (It’s an rpg game in case you didn’t know.) I ...

    Jan 13, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: to you, my love from far away

    I think that the title works with the story! No, it’s not unrealistic. A wife misses her husband, so she writes letters to him. I think that the ending is ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Roles

    I think that the ending is actually pretty wholesome. A young child takes things into their own hands. Yes, the form of the poem does match how it’s written. Nothing ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: What a Girlfriend Is (or Serena’s Slice-of-life in Space)

    Ahhh Serena and Izzy are so cute together! I like how E4 supports them being together, it’s so wholesome to see. I hope that their relationship stays intact no matter ...

    Jan 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: down the rabbit hole

    I like how it’s written like magic. Like writing is a fantastical art and in many ways, it is. It can be hard though, as shown in this poem. It ...

    Jan 9, 2023


As if you were on fire from within. The moon lives in the lining of your skin.
— Pablo Neruda