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Re: Beauty in the Macabre
It’s true that bad things in life will happen, but like you said, the best one can do is find “Beauty in the macabre.” I really like how you wrote ...
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Re: An adventure with Nightshade: The Tree Wing Village
I think that the green dragon is Ceiba! Ceiba misses Nightshade. The song is so good! The bioluminescent forest is so cool. I can imagine that the forest shines just ...
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Re: An adventure with Nightshade: Adventure in the Mind
Ceiba might still like Nightshade even after everything. The cover art, is that Nightshade? Well, I can see why living creatures would be hypnotized by her. I will read the ...
Feb 25, 2023 -
Re: An adventure with Nightshade: The choice.
I love making connections with characters too! I’ll read the stories in the order that you recommend. The hypnosis one first and the Tree Wing one second. I have been ...
Feb 24, 2023 -
Re: Nightshade and the wolf girl (origin of Lupita)
I like Lupita. She cares about Nara. Her heart is in the right place. Honestly, the characters so far are all really special in their own way. I’ll check out ...
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Re: Nightshade's favorite feline (origin of Nara)
Interesting. Nightshade has a new friend now. I hope that Nara is alright with this. It seems like she is, but there’s still another chapter to read. At least Nightshade ...
Feb 22, 2023 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Misc.
I like all of these ideas! My favorite one was the one with the playground. I find it interesting how Kim worries about people dying in a brand new playground. ...
Feb 21, 2023 -
Re: Origin of Nightshade
The humans were lucky. I’m glad that she at least left them off with a warning. I have a feeling that Diantha and Zephyr might encounter Nightshade again later on. ...
Feb 20, 2023 -
Re: Rolls & Roles
The original was good, but this revision was really great. Now we get to read about how the child feels. The child has a role that will shape and mold ...
Feb 19, 2023 -
Re: Crimson night
This was so sad. He really thinks that he’s alone. There could be others like him who might be willing to help. I guess that it’s too late for him. ...
Feb 18, 2023 -
Re: Forbidden Love
I wasn’t scared of this poem. I saw this as a romance poem, where a man has a devoted love to nature. It is kind of creepy if you think ...
Feb 17, 2023 -
Re: You
Who is the creation? The girl or the speaker? Could the girl have created the speaker and they want to be left alone? Maybe the speaker created the girl and ...
Feb 16, 2023 -
Re: The Devourer -- Horror Poem
When I first read this poem, I thought that it was about a demon. It is, except that the demon is Winter. Now that I think about it, it makes ...
Feb 15, 2023 -
Re: Lovewell's Song
Even in death, love still resides. Even after death, there is still love. Maybe one day they will reunite with each other. Until then, she is all alone. This piece ...
Feb 14, 2023 -
Re: The school of magical spies-part one
They all thought that Kat was evil? That journal entry was from 1963. There could be a chance that someone else named Kat wrote it. Or maybe she is subconsciously ...
Feb 13, 2023
