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Re: The Incorrect Ballad
The first part I imagine to be about feeling confined in school. The second part I think is about a girl returning to her hometown. The third part is what ...
Jun 20, 2023 -
Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 1: The Ghost
I think that this chapter introduced Jay well. This story was so interesting that I had to keep reminding myself that it wasn’t fanfiction. Jay does come off as a ...
Jun 19, 2023 -
Re: Hideout- A Star Wars Story
So they drove off into hyperspace? At least they are all safe for now. From what I can recall, nothing can find them in hyperspace. But wow, I can’t believe ...
Jun 18, 2023 -
Re: Ambush - A Star Wars Story
I don’t know much about Star Wars, but I do check it out once in a while. (I like Disney World’s Star Wars land). My favorite Star Wars character would ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: The Right Choice
This story was so mysterious, but with a hint of humor. I love it! I could see why Sayuki might have second thoughts on what she did, but I don’t ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: the haunted areas pt 2
A hole opened into their universe? Interesting…could it be that their very universe is weak? Anything could come through. Earth could experience multiple dimensions coming into contact with it. Hope
Jun 15, 2023 -
Re: horror theme park pt1
A haunted theme park overrun by monsters? Count me in! It seems like it was once a regular theme park, but taken over by creatures! I wonder how it came ...
Jun 14, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - 1.3
For now, Rei seems like an antihero. He’s after Arson, who appears to be a famous rich man without a care in the world and he back to a homeless ...
Jun 13, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 12
This isn’t looking good. Leader is just going to torture Sako and Yagi. Hopefully they’ll get out soon. I’m really nervous for them all. This chapter, like the others, was ...
Jun 12, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 11
Ryan is helping Sako, at least, so that’s good. I understand why Yagi would be protective of Sako, considering how she talked about him behind his back. He controlled himself, ...
Jun 10, 2023 -
Re: RECYCLED, ODDBALLS
I want to know, are these a collection of Urban Legends or stories you made up? Either way, these are really interesting. My favorite one is the vampire grave, I ...
Jun 10, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2- the second to last unicorn- chapter 6
It’s a good thing that Missy can’t dance, because that would be trouble for Charlotte. Is Missy dead or injured? I think she might be injured because there’s more coming ...
Jun 8, 2023 -
Re: Crafting Chickens
I like that this shows the different possibilities of chickens. I believe that this poem represents how anyone can change and yet stay true to themselves, no matter what happens ...
Jun 7, 2023 -
Re: Midnight Chronicles
I love Wednesday Addams, she’s my favorite Addams Family character, so I just had to check this out. I have to say, this really does feel like a page from ...
Jun 6, 2023 -
Re: LC Excerpt 3 part 3
After so many years, they were triumphant. They won the war. They’re victorious! It will take a while for things to get back to normal for them, but at least ...
Jun 6, 2023
