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Re: The Dark truth E.2
So the plot thickens! That boy in the photo wasn’t her brother, but the family’s painter. Maybe even the sister’s friend or boyfriend. Could it be that he is the ...
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Re: The Dark Truth E.1
I saw this story and wanted to read this story for a while. So, here I am! I can say for certain that I’m coming back for more of this ...
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Re: To My Friend, The Werewolf Girl
That sounds like an epic friend! Dream friends are a nice escape from life. Maybe in another dream the werewolf girl might return, who knows? But it must have been ...
Jul 22, 2023 -
Re: One Day
I imagine for this to be about walking through the nonsense of the world and just living life. My favorite parts were when chocolate and whipped cream were mentioned, just ...
Jul 21, 2023 -
Re: Gymnopedie #3
The turmoiling and bothersome thoughts can feel like a crescendo of high and low notes, changing in intensity, but never changing in effect. It can be hectic, but controlled to ...
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Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon
This reminds me of “The sun proposed to the moon” trend on YouTube. I like it! Most people use the sun as a symbol of joy, but it’s the very ...
Jul 19, 2023 -
Re: lost song.
Before I heard of lost media, I never thought that it was possible for a creative work to be lost to time. It makes me a little sad to think ...
Jul 18, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2 the 2nd to last unicorn.....chapter 7
Does Ellie’s spell that she did with Baddie have to do with Charlotte losing her memory, or is that completely separate? This is the end of part two? Oh boy…I ...
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Re: Of Fake and Real Time Travellers
I like how you talked about humans reacting to unfamiliar things. It’s so true! Either they’re fascinated, freaked out, or both. I think that Simon was lonely and just having ...
Jul 16, 2023 -
Re: Cruxless. Chapter's 1-4 of the rewrite, uh... It's still mid guy's don't worry. Not much has changed.
It seems like from this rewrite, Cooper is more unsure about his fate. I like that! It’s interesting. Hinsa gives me Harley Quinn vibes. (Before she broke up with The ...
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Re: A Letter to Satan
A kid writing a letter to Satan instead of Santa could be an easily made mistake. At least Satan got Joyce what she truly wanted: A pony. That ending was ...
Jul 14, 2023 -
Re: (the shadow crown book draft) chapter 3
Deianara wants to help them? That was unexpected, but…pleasantly unexpected. It’s great to have an ally like her around. More dangers might arise because of this, but even then, it’s ...
Jul 13, 2023 -
Re: Re: Eloise Meets Alastair
I decided to check this out since I like vampires…and I’m intrigued. Eloise’s life is never going to be the same again, especially with the moments of time slipping in ...
Jul 12, 2023 -
Re: (the shadow crown book draft) chapter 1;2
I’d like to see a continuation of this story. Deianara and Caerwyn definitely have history with each other. Does Reyna not trust the princess enough that she lies about her ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 4
Annabel tasted freedom for just a few minutes, but Elijah had taken her away. :( It seems like she’ll have to wait out on an escape even longer or risk ...
Jul 10, 2023
