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It has two yous, because the first one ties in with the line above. That's why it didn't have any punctuation. The beast is supposed to represent the need to ...

Thanks. The only reason I used try was because it was supposed to show how hard the voice is to destroy. The Him is supposed to be the voice Which ...

Thank you.

Thank you.

Hannah, Actually what I meant by that was that bullets can miss and obviously they have, but his heart failure won't. It will kill him and there's nothing they can ...

I normally am really careful. I hate grammatical errors.. I just typed it in a hurry on my blog then pasted it here. I had to get off the computer ...

Yeah, it's very true actually.. But that's okay.

Thank you very much. It means a lot. :)

I really love it. I think you made the flow work really well. The scheme is fantastic as is the theme. I really liked it.

Yeah. It just sorta came out..

Hahah. I love it, the mad hatter is my favorite character! It was funny and I have nothing to add to take away, cause I loved it. :)

I added another paragraph and got rid of that part I just added. Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my ...

I added another paragraph and got rid of that part I just added. Hear my cree, listen to me, I'm not the person- I seem to be. Look in my ...

I thought it was great. Fantastic. Amazing. I'm out of words! I loved it. :) Keep writing cause you're pretty awesome. Sincerely, Ciara

I love it, and I generally would rather a poem to rhyme. But yours flowed perfectly that I loved it. Keep writing because you're talented! I'd love to hear more ...