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Re: Phoenix Inferno 1.1 (revised)
Hey Chrissy, I'm here to review! Thank you so much for tagging me! I just feel bad that I couldn't review as soon as I saw the tag. But I'm ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: The Manhunt
Wow wow wow. I really love this! Everything about this. The story. The writing. You have this way with words. The way you describe things, the way you describe what ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Whom You Belong
Hey there, comrie here to review! I will start and say that I think you should read up on something about punctuation. I think that's your main problem here. Not ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: A Day in September
Hey there, comrie here to review! This was a very interesting story. I will sound off on the other reviewers' comments about providing more descriptions on just where the characters ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Five
Hey! I'm so late with these reviews, sorry about that. Getting back home took so much of my time that I just remembered that I forgot to review your other ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Four
Heyyyyy I'm back and I'm ready for some reviewing! Thank you so much for tagging me! I read this once yesterday and did so again today before writing this. So ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Three
Hey Shadow! I read this way earlier but I'm just now getting started on this review. Thank you for alerting me, I only wish I wrote this as soon as ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Two
Heyy ShadowVyper, I'm here to review! Very interesting chapter. Action-y, especially toward the end. Your writing style never lets me down. It's strong and every word seems to be carefully ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: ...
Um. Please like this. I read in the description that you didn't know if you should like this or not, but I think you should like this. Why? Well... uh... ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Color Photographs, Chapter One
Hi ShadowVyper, I thought I'd review this. I really like the title. I wonder how it ties into the story. Right now I'm not sure but maybe I missed it. ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
I LOVE THIS. Everything about this. Your writing is strong and beautiful, and you made me curious about this Ironwood Queen all throughout, and wondering where her role in this ...
May 19, 2015 -
Re: That day when this struggle started
This was a nice poem. The words were pretty, the meaning amazing. I think you did an awesome job with this. So kudos! I'll point out things that looked funny ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: For You
Hey SnazzyPencil, comrie here to review~ This put a smile on my face as soon as I started, and that smile grew as I continued to read along. This was ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Remember, please
Wow, I really liked this. I didn't expect to like this, just because sometimes I have trouble with simply understanding some poetry and it's because I don't read it as ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: Rabbit Heart: 1
Hi Satira, comrie here to review. I'll try to keep this review as orderly as I can! I liked your story a lot. It was a nicely written and I ...
May 17, 2015
