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Hey, annie! clogs here to review! I almost feel like this would be better posted in the Serious Discussion and Debate forum instead of as a literary work. Then, you ...

This poem's out of whack. Your flow is off. You just can't rhyme. Your grammar isn't even as good as an ill- oh wait. jk, that was all in jest. ...

Hey Alice! clogs here to review! Oooh, this is such a lovely poem. I like the simplicity of it. A few suggestions, though: Their vibrant colors illuminate the day, reflecting ...

Hey, phangirl! clogs here to review! Idk, I feel like I've seen this on tumblr or something before. Or even my mom's facebook page. It feels more like a meme ...

Hey, fandoms! clogs here for a review! I think that this poem gets off to a really strong start with the crayon metaphor, but then it kind of starts to ...

giving you an actual review since you got cheated out of one below *sigh* I'm already finding it difficult to not revert into chatspeak with you but I'll do my ...

Hey, keepwriting! clogs here for a review in this closing stretch of Review Day! Okay, first things first: I feel like I've said this a million times, but why did ...

Hey, snakeboy! clogs here for a Review Day review! Ok, first things first: The last paragraph is way, way, way, way, WAY too long. Like, that's just hard to read. ...

Hey there! clogs here for a Review Day review! This was pretty intriguing. I think that the biggest obstacle to tackle in this is going to be grammar. acm already ...

Hey, NympheaLily! clogs here for a Review Day review! I apologize for just kind of jumping into the middle of the story without reading any other chapters, but I promise ...

Hey, Ashley! clogs here for a Review Day review! The first thing I'm going to talk about is formatting. I personally dislike centering poetry (and text in general) because that's ...

Hey, gymnast! clogs here for a review! I'm kinda just dropping in the middle of your story without reading the previous chapters, so I apologize for that, haha. I can ...

Hey, babydoll! clogs here for a Review Day review! First bit of advice: Maybe think about putting this into stanzas. It might help with organization of your thoughts a bit. ...

Hey, Eternal! clogs here for a Review Day review! I'm gonna steal an expression from another lovely reviewer on this site *coughmorrigancough* and say this: It's filled with good intentions. ...

clogs here to review on this fine Review Day! Like the previous reviewer, I'm not entirely sure what this is meant to be. To me, it feels like more of ...