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Whispers of reassurance. "I love you," "No you don't," "Yes I do." as if taken from experience. the things used to say to each other.. I think you really miss ...

wow. you capture a dream moment for that poem.. romantic and reminds us of beautiful memories of the past.

the presence of someone so dear is truly an inspiration for us to see the good in everything. i felt the longing from that poem.. nice work

Small precious things put into words. Nice piece

I think you should sent it to your teacher. :)

I listen As does our gracious moon i might replace it with something like, "just like"

running water, flowing stream took the bad and create the good.. nice..

The noise the water makes when I move is to loud, too loud, I guess.. nice short poem.

Goodbye Ricky, was my last thought before the entirety of the other car completely crushed mine. I got confused, if I missed something, your were mentioned about Jason and Peter, ...

Very true.. and like the rhymes.

Yeah. the busy world at times don't make sense. Looking but not seeing. Hearing but not listening.. Losing your passion to go on. Not having much enthusiasm for a dream.. ...

the death of someone so special, so close to your heart is truly devastating, it change your life . just like that. no point of going back

thank you for taking the time to read my very first posted work here. and thanks for your review.

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