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Hi! again :) .. I like what this chapter wants to impart. That you'll find love even in the most improbable kind of situation, whether romantically or not. The thought ...

Hi! there Fade :) Welcome to YWS. Can't wait to hear the melody of this song. It feels light and nice. Though, yeah, it makes me quite sad that those ...

Hi! and Welcome to YWS PatchworkStudy :) This was so cute, fun and romantic . hahaha. I apologize for that, I just can't contain my smile. I don't have anything ...

Hi! there CollinWitte :) .. Before anything else, “claps.” This was so good. As the story moves, I became curious, nervous, thrilled and wowed along with the characters. And what ...

Hi! there pjkio03 :) .. I really like the message of this story—another chance to live up your life. After the pain that you've endured, you have finally found the ...

Hi! there Twilight :) .. I won't argue with the previous comments because, seriously, this explodes with emotions. A mixture of anger, blame, uncertainty and, most certainly, love . Something ...

Hi! there GrapeNerd :) .. *just have to suppress my smile… ok* I like the irony you used to clearly state what you really feel. It sounded like someone ranting ...

Hi! there Alchemist :) I had seen a picture quote yesterday, it says: Look forward with hope not backwards with regret. —Greg Olsen Hope this helps.. Moving on, I encountered ...

Greetings! :) The epiphany in this chapter is much surprising. That, afterwards, it made me come up with “How is that possible?” A question that lingers but, I know, it ...

Hi! there Renn :) .. What a nice chapter.. Your descriptions, from their simplest gesture to the most complex ones, were so vivid that I imagined the scenes and the ...

Once again, Hi! :) .. I apologize for the delay.. Henceforth, a new character is disclosed with a mission at hand--to declare Sarah as a Fullmetal Alchemist 80% and 20% ...

Hi! there ulala8 :) .. Your imagery, similes and metaphors are fascinating. They add spice to your story that enables us to imagine and cope-up with the sequence of events. ...

Hi! there Youngwriter724 :) .. The description of events as well as the infatuation of Jett is realistic that makes a reader catch-up and relate to the story. Thus, I ...

Hi! again WindSailor, I really like your compositions, they're heartfelt. You emphasize that GOD is always there and is watching over us. Specifically, I really liked this lines: But God ...

Hi! there Em101cats :) .. I find this story so adorable. It didn't feel like that the events and their reaction were forced but more of a realistic one. Especially, ...