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I shivered completely throughout this whole poem, and I felt as if I was a wolf, hunting down prey, and I can see the blood at my paws. I've seen ...

This looks like an improvement, but I do have a lot of things to say, regarding editing. "...with this?" asked Spencer..." Put period after glasses. tell Trent the plan, so ...

There is good description in the first chapter of this. I love how you describe the characters and the setting because that's exactly what the novel needs if you want ...

I wish I were a bird, so I can fly. I bet it's just as amazing as this short story. Because of this, I want to fly. Don't you just ...

I really like this story even though the title gave me the complete chills to not read it. I like how detailed this is, and the characters to this story ...

Another story told and another great poem from his truly. Whenever you rhyme in your poetry, it sounds natural. The ending completely reminds me of Romeo and Juliet when Juliet ...

Here's some of my editing advice: hunched legs, and when the boy walks past, he nearly does not see me. I expect him to pass me by as others have ...

I like what you did with this poem. It goes both ways if someone knows how it works. It's like a secret message. If I were still in high school, ...

This reminds me of my dogs sometimes. We do all we can for the dogs, but they still steal your food off the table or counters as if it's their ...

I agree with Fade on the drop drips. Also, I feel as if there is no exact rhythm. I mean the rhythm doesn't have to be the same, but you ...

This sounds like a sweet story, but it seems too short. It's lacking detail is what I believe because I don't know much about the cafe or the characters. I ...

With the first two lines, "If I passed myself on the street today/I don't think I would recognize myself," it sounded a lot like me. When I do look at ...

"Still mourning over your broken heart?" he asked back... "Oh, please..." He came and sat next to me... I like the details in this story. That's a good thing when ...

Honestly, my favorite part of this poem is the gem metaphors. Love at first sight is the sweetest thing, but it can also be the most bittersweet. I'm a hopeless ...

This poem breaks my heart because that used to be me, believing that all the bad things about me are true. When it comes to poetry, you do speak the ...