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Re: This Forsaken World
Hi there ! *waves* cat here ^^ (or muffy or catmuff) Since almost everyone already got the grammar stuff down (and since you asked for it) I'm gonna be reviewing ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: We Are the Cowards
Hi there *waves* it's muffy (or cat or catmuff) First off, Love the idea in general. And for someone your age to be able to write something like this? Outstanding. ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Into the Deep
Hi *waves* I'm catmuffin. You can call me cat, catmuff or muffy ^^ I'm not a pro at poetry and I'm not good at decoding a poem but this is ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Don't
Hi there! I'm catmuffin(or catmuff or cat or muffy) @Marshymallow Dayum you're fast XD Anyways on to the review. Loved the poem. Sweet, simple and rhythmic. Though I spot a ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: I See
Hi there *waves* I'm catmuffin (or cat, or muffy or catmuff) I can feel the vibe of this poem. A sad and hurt one. Pro tip though: I see a ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Squirrel!
Hi there! *waves* I'm catmuffin. You can call me cat, catmuff or muffy. Hmm... This poem is really hard to crack. Does it have a deep symbolic meaning or is ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: The Academy
Seemed like short 1st and 2nd chapters. Remember detail makes it a lot more realistic for the readers. Be careful with your grammar and don't forget to thoroughly check your ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Scores of the Glass
First off, Hi there! You can call me cat, catmuff or muffy. Okay maybe I'm just not used to it, but it was kind of hard to read your poem. ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Music Box
Oh. My. Gosh. I absolutely LOVE IT. I love your style of writing, dark and creepy and just great. Although this requires a bit of polishing and a little bit ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Something I Realized
What you're experiencing is probably an existential crisis. A wise man once told me, you only have one life so it;s up to you to make the best you can ...
Apr 2, 2015
