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Re: She Hides Behind Her Smile
I liked it. For me, it's almost like, A SONG. wow. You should put music to this. It's really nice. Good work! Keep writing!
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: DEAR MUM
It's powerful, intense, sad, heart-aching. I liked it. It's nice. Great job! Keep writing!
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: The truth behind the smile.
I liked it. I like the rhyming, it really went well. It speaks of me too. I try to hide what I feel as much as possible even though I ...
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: Tree -- Draft Two
I liked it. I liked the figurative language in it. Good job dreamer.
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: There's something about addictive iconics
It was as good as the first one. Anger, aaaaahh. Feisty woman you are. lol. [s]Liked[/s] Loved it!
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Food
I loved this. I love the way you wrote it! Good job, Dreamer or Selene as PA calls you!
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: The Loveliest Spice
Hey there. I have a poem with the same topic like this too. Search, My Friend. Nice poem.
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Finally Home-prelude
Uh it was rather short. But I liked it. Maybe you can make it longer by telling what happened and why you think that you are home.
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: The Lucky Friend
There are a lot or grammatical errors that you should correct. Anyway, it was nice. I liked it. Happy Birthday trick!
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Oh Baby, How could you?
Uhh, this is uhh, interesting. It's a bit graphic but it's okay since you rated it anyway. I was nice. Emotions are very strong which is good.
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: bound to you
I liked it. It was short yet you were able to say what you really feel. Very nice!
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Alone
It's an interesting poem. Lots of emotion. I like the way you used figurative language. Good Job!
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: A Night With My Lover
It might be a short poem but it flowed really well! Good job! The rhyming was very natural. Why don't you make it longer?
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: When you feel.
It's short and simple. It's nice.
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Em Doesn't Like Poetry
I liked this. It's funny :) It made me laugh.
Apr 2, 2008