Published April 16, 2008
For the nth time it was believed as the coming out of some shitty hot celeb.
For the nth time it was magnified into the confessions of a royal paper delved within his ink.
For the nth time it was venerated in the warm sounding of that cold "I give up." yesterday.[although i pretty much found something like a smile creep up all while.]
For the nth time of nothing-ness I found something-ness.
For the nth time damnation hailed from across his world and he had let me know.
For the nth time he dwindled like an elf trapped in a matriarchal gate. A cute elf. A very cute elf.
For the nth time beneath the violet shadows i once perceived dangerous, i came to the light...no not the white light you see when youre dying.
For the nth time, I used bloody coz they told me how well you respond to such twaddles.
For the last nth time my dear, I wouldn't have known what Love is...If it bloody wasn't for you.
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Very good. I liked the rythmic-repetitiveness. I do think "nth" would be better as "billionth" or "infininth" though. It's a bit awkward.
WOW. I really liked that!
The way that you use a lack of a numerical value, and just use "nth," really make the piece very different, in a good way.
Usually, I'm not a poetry fan, but I just happened to love this!
Keep up the good work.
The Drowsy Kaye.
Rating changed to PG-13 for language
"Nth" should be "Ninth" Also, this to have an R rating. You used "Shit" in this. This has to be rated R. I also added commas where they need to be. I hope this helps!
-Rick.
Lol this is awsome, almost as good as the first one.
Lol. I think you gotta read doble cara first, then this. Obviously coz this is the sequel. :p Anyway, thanks for the kind reviews
It was as good as the first one.
Anger, aaaaahh. Feisty woman you are. lol.
[s]Liked[/s] Loved it!
Wow thats amazing!!!!!