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Thanks for the comment! Just a heads up, these are not stanzas -- each is an individual work. I'll edit the piece to make this clearer.

The rhythm flows as gently as rolling hills in the countryside. Not the deepest work, but a pleasure to read and view, like a beautiful portrait. Thank you for another ...

I think you misused the word "adamant". I don't think it means what you think it means.

I can't agree with this paper's conclusion "homosexuality is bad", because it draws this conclusion from the Biblical model of morality. By this model, as long as God says it ...

Thanks, I wanted to mention my own confusion about the date, and my lack of awareness of any particle soup happening back then.

Oh Porky-senpai, you're such a baka!

urg. I keep looking at this and thinking it refers to the programming language C#. I would LOVE to see punk written in a programming language.

This poem was really quite good.

You wrote this to dissuade your friend from cutting, but aren't planning on showing it her, in spite of her doing a similar thing for you? That seems a little ...

Vodka has no calories, and will make you no fatter than you are already. Unfortunately, this is wrong. Vodka has about 5 times as many calories as the equivalent amount ...

Incredible! I think this is the most words I've seen written that mention nothing about the story itself!

Neat.

Buddhism is totally a religion. It replaces God with universal forces of balance. Raelism doesn't have a god either, but it's very much classified as a religion.

Draw a line on the sand, call it a poem, and nobody can say you're wrong -- that's what I'm getting from this. Sure, why not.

if you don't wanna cause offense, how about keeping your opinions to yourself? on the flip side, don't whine if someone comes onto one of your works and says No ...