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Re: Sweet Cherry Blossom
Hai :3 Aaa!! What a sweet poem for your mother!! This is so lovely and tender, and I'm sure it would be met well. I'm usually not a fan of ...
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Re: Speculations on Love
Hai :3 This is such a gorgeous and complex piece!! I’m blown away by how deeply personal and reflective it is, yet it still feels universal in so many ways. ...
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Re: I saw the TV glow
Hai :3 Oh my gosh, this is SUCH an evocative poem!! I love how you’ve used the TV as this extended metaphor ~~ Like, it’s so clever and layered!! The ...
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Re: Perpetual Motion
Hai :3 This is such a neat poem!! I love this so much; it’s so playful and tactile, but there’s this underlying weight to it that makes it feel shocking ...
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Re: Seaglass Eyes
Hai :3 Oh my gosh, this poem is breathtaking!! It’s so vivid and textured, like you can almost hear the waves crashing and feel the grit of the sand on ...
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Re: delicately brewed
Hai :3 This is so lovely and heart-wrenching!! The whole vibe of this poem is like a quiet, fading memory, bittersweet but gentle, holding on but also letting go. I’m ...
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Re: sleeping in separate rooms
Hai :3 This is seriously powerful stuff!! There is this eerie, almost ritualistic tone, like she's this unshakable force you’re bound to. To me, it feels like a trauma loop ...
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Re: the monster in the maze
Hai :3 Ahh this is stunning!! It's like a a dark, twisting descent that reads like a myth. I’m absolutely hooked on the way you’ve woven the classic story of ...
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Re: you're keeping me alive
Hai :3 This is so beautifully melancholic, and I'm feeling every bit of it!! You’ve really captured that crisp, chilly autumn vibe in the first line ~~ Like, it’s like ...
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Re: Speech: AI Generators Should Not Be Used
Hai :3 This essay really digs into such a relevant topic, and I’m loving that you’re bringing so much passion to the argument against AI!! I’m totally feeling your energy ...
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Re: teaching notes
Hai :3 This is so beautiful and powerful!! The way you’ve structured it feels almost like a philosophical lesson disguised as poetry, and that makes it hit even deeper. I ...
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Re: vacuum silence
Hai :3 This is such a beautifully haunting poem!! The imagery you've woven in is just stunning ~~ Like, it captures that feeling of separation and yearning so well!! I ...
Oct 8, 2024 -
Re: Birthdays Lost
Hai :3 This poem is absolutely incredible!! Right from the start, it's so visceral! This not only sets a tone of violence but also suggests a forceful entry into a ...
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Re: pollution
Hai :3 This poem hits hard!! I can feel the frustration and the bleakness throughout, and it’s got this super urgent vibe, like you’re trying to shake people awake. It’s ...
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Re: pen on paper
Hai :3 I adore this!! There's this beautiful melancholic nostalgia that just radiates from the poem, and I can feel that mix of sadness and reflection in every line. The ...
Oct 5, 2024
