candyhearts

Hai :3 Aaa this is so beautiful and bittersweet!! The metaphor with the dandelion really got to me ~~ Like, it perfectly captures that feeling of being something delicate, something ...

Hai :3 This is so intense and dark, I love it!! The mix of biblical and mythological references with the personal, emotional struggle really gives this so much depth ~~ ...

Hai :3 This is so good!! I love how raw and layered it feels!! The use of geography as a metaphor to reflect the emotional distance hits hard, like, you're ...

Hai :3 This poem is stunning!! Like, the whole connection between the land and generations is such a beautiful sentiment. There's this sense of something deeper, a kind of shared ...

Seoyoung!! Hai :3 Aaa it's so exciting to read more of your stories!! I'm not the best when it comes to prose or even nonfiction, but I love your writing ...

Hai :3 The whole mood of this poem is sooo intimate and tender ~~ I can literally feel it wrapping around me like a soft blanket!! All of the imagery ...

Hai :3 This poem is so lovely!! There's this sense of delicacy threaded through it, like you're tiptoeing through someone's emotional garden, literally and metaphorically ~~ Like, it's so soft ...

Hai :3 I love how you’ve written this ~~ It’s like you're speaking directly to the reader's soul!! The way you’ve woven the idea of being a character in a ...

Hai :3 I adore this!! The structure is like a wave crashing and pulling back, constantly pulling me in and then throwing me off balance, which is so Theseus and ...

Hai :3 This is sososo cool!! The vibe is eerie but also kind of sweet in that twisted way, you know? You really nailed that stalker perspective ~~ Like, it’s ...

Hai :3 I'm not the best at reviewing prose, but this caught my eye!! ^_^ This is sososo beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time!! The way you’ve crafted the ...

Hai :3 This is so good!! The tension, the back-and-forth between longing and fear feels like the narrator is trapped in their own mind, torn between wanting this person and ...

Hai :3 I've reviewed one of your poems before!! ^_^ This one is gorgeous!! It's got such a dreamy, introspective flow that really pulls you in and makes you reflect ...

Hai :3 I reviewed one of your other poems!! ^_^ I really like this one!! It's so soft yet so heavy at the same time!! The conversation-like flow is just ...

Hai :3 I reviewed something else by you!! ^_^ This one has such a raw and visceral energy!! The imagery is striking right from the start, just from the first ...