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callmeLily73

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Uncut Love

    I love your lyrics! It amazes me that you don't hold back when it comes to expressing yourself in the words. And you make yourself clear so every one understands. ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Ch2 Part 2

    I love your story! It filled my heart and is so amazing to read! Also I love when you wrote, You and pancakes go together, but sorry pancakes I love ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Stay Forever [Chapter One]

    I like your story very much, it filles me with couriousity to see where this story turns out like I think it will. I think this could evolve into an ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: In The Dark - Chapter 3

    I really love your story! I love how you end each shapter with a cliff hanger so it leaves the reader wanting more. And I can't wait for chapter 4! ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: In The Dark - Chapter 2

    I really like your story! It really is dramatic are I love how you leave the reader on a cliff hanger at the end! Please, private message me when you ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Kaelynne's Love Story Ch2 Part 1

    Not to be mean, but you have some puncuation erreors. Like here: It’s so magnificent more than magnificent. You should probably change it to " It’s so magnificent; no, more ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Secret Legacy

    I love your poem! It is very beautiful and it is very good and it has a very good way of setting the mood and its easy to understand the ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Divine Beauty Haiku

    I really like your poem!! It really sets up a perfect scene of beauty in nature! I love it ! You have loads of talent! keep on writing! ***And please ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wondering

    I like your poem very much, it is beautiful and it fills me with wonder. I like when you put: Slipping away form me are my decaying memories.I am cast ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Memories

    I Love you poem very much! It is very creative and inspiring! I like your choice of wording, its unlike many others and i love it! You have loads of ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Untitled (Scene one)

    I love your script! I cant wait for you to write more! please do! It is very good! You have alot of talent! Keep on writing! And Privite Message me ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 13 reasons why...

    I love your poem! It implys its genre beautifuly unlike others- very dramatic! I like your way of words- very different than most, You surley have talent! Keep on writing!! ...

    Mar 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sunset Magic

    I like your poem, and I give it a 7. It has a wonderful title and theme that gives the person a good mantal image baut maybe it wouldnt hurt ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How Do You...

    I do like your poem and it really is creative. I give it a 6. but maybe it could be a 8 or 9 if you spike it up a ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost Childhood

    I love your poem! it really expreses the pain of the story teller. I might cry! I love your comparison of lawers and doors! really creative! keep on writing! :) ...

    Mar 10, 2010


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