Published April 10, 2010
Uncut love
VERSE 1
Blood dripping from your jaw
You don’t know who you are
Knife resting in your hand, cocktail on the floor
Ink running down the walls
Curtains ripped to shreds
You’re lost inside yourself, can’t find your way out
BRIDGE
So we’ll go
Down to earth
In the dark and shred them apart
CHORUS
You are so confused, lost in this love
You don’t want to let go, but babe you just have to
Falling down to the ground, and then you stop moving
Down in the dark, you can feel but not see
In this uncut love
VERSE 2
Tears running down your face
Vomit on the floor
Over flowing toilet bowl, drowning in your bath tub
Rats gnawing on your flesh
Grime on the tiles
Your minds elsewhere, can’t face reality
BRIDGE
So we’ll go
Down to earth
In the dark and shred them apart
CHORUS
You are so confused, lost in this love
You don’t want to let go, but babe you just have to
Falling down to the ground, and then you stop moving
Down in the dark, you can feel but not see
In this uncut love
VERSE 3
Head resting on the bed
Body bruised and sore
Nothings gonna stop you now, so just go on do it
Dead roses on the floor
Pistol to your head
Pull the fucking trigger, now you’re dead
CHORUS
You are so confused, lost in this love
You don’t want to let go, but babe you just have to
Falling down to the ground, and then you stop moving
Down in the dark, you can feel but not see
In this uncut love
Your heart is black, your mouth is sly
You can’t see through those blood shot eyes
Your body aint moving, you’re cold and dry
You’re afraid of your darker side
BRIDGE
So we’ll go
Down to earth
In the dark and shred them apart
CHORUS
You are so confused, lost in this love
You don’t want to let go, but babe you just have to
Falling down to the ground, and then you stop moving
Down in the dark, you can feel but not see
In this uncut love
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These lyrics were pretty amazing. You have a great sense of rhythm, and I could almost feel the song. The one thing that tripped me up is that it isn't clear on the first read through where the chorus ends and the next verse begins. I suggest either going back and spacing things so that there's a gap in between the choruses and verses, or labelling the verses (Verse 1, Verse 2, etc.)
I love your lyrics! It amazes me that you don't hold back when it comes to expressing yourself in the words. And you make yourself clear so every one understands. I can hear in my head what it would sound like if it was a song. You have loads of talent! Keep on writing!
-Lily <3