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Well. That was...different. I liked it. I like the rhythm more or less and the name Cassatt makes me think of maracas - the sound they make, you know? Anwyays. ...

Awesome. I have only one nitpick, and that is that it seems to me there should be a "the" before "Stars". But maybe I'm being slightly obsessive. Hehe. Anyways, other ...

I adore it. Seriously. Dont ask me why, since I have a feeling the real meaning just blew right past me (Yep, there he goes...) but I felt the rhythm, ...

You know I love your stuff ... usually. Sorry, Firestarter, I cant get enthused about this one. It sounded...well, like what it was describing. Flat and sucked dry. Was that ...

I'm afraid I'm going to be blunt. I apologise in advance for any offense I may cause, please take this as it is meant; CONSTRUCTIVELY...really. :oops: It's only my opinion, ...

Weellll...I liked it, up to a point. Specifically, up to "He finds himself imitating him". To begin with, its great, from a unique sort of perspective and the simplistic line ...

Oooh first review *does dance* LOL Unfortunately I cant be v. helpful cuz I loved it :cry: I'm sorry! I did! Every word! :( You're just too good.... :lol: :lol: ...

Mmmh I liked it up to the ending. I was kinda exspecting a bigger finale, you know? More punch is needed here IMHO. Maybe you could work on that. Otherwise, ...

Whoa. I cant believe you used to claim you didnt WRITE poetry. Jesus. I might as well just pack up my pens and leave. :wink: Another brilliant poem, Firestarter. Particularly ...

I love it. For some reason I get the picture of an old map, you know, parchment type stuff and everything. And mountains. And snow. And windows. :shock: I'm weird.

LMAO OMG I love it! How can anyone top that? Particularly the line "Larry was overreacting over a little rain." I'm in stitches. :lol: :lol: :lol:

Well since I couldnt understand that I'm gonna have to assume I'm not repeating anything you said, Griffinkeeper. My critique; I liked it. Its intriguing, although it could use a ...

I promise I'll give a more thorough review in a moment. Right now, I just have to scream, and scream loudly. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! OK. There. I've screamed. I'm sorry, this isn

be honest, I quite liked it, but it could use some revision. I stare at a regular piece of paper and it occurs to me it can represent me. I ...

I couldnt finish Jane Eyre - I knew the ending and I hated Jane...UGH! What a simpering ninny! But Wuthering Heights is great - really creepy in parts. So passionate. ...