brokeninpieces

I have to agree with everyone. I really like it and I also love the way you used old English and yet your a modern writer. So, good job. :) ...

I like it, it's short but not simple, like most short poems. It has a hidden meaning that is easy to see, but is beautiful and unique. Though, I'd switch ...

I like it, I can just picture like a fairy or some beautiful elf dancing in the forest with only the moon as her light. It's really a beautiful poem, ...

I agree, that it does have some errors, but I really love it! It's good and something I agree with totally. Really, it's awesome. Just do a little editing and ...

I'm really not sure what to say to this. It has a good idea, but it needs a lot of work. Your structure needs work, and some different word choices ...

I really like this poem, especially the last stanza. It's good, but you really should keep the rhyming thing through out the whole poem, and not just a few stanzas. ...

I really like it, but you do have some spelling errors which really bug me, so please just fix that and it'd be fine. Other than that, I liked it. ...

I liked it and can understand where you're coming from. I'm also in a long distance relationship and now he's in jail, so it's even harder. One tip though, try ...

Wow, just wow. I've never seen a poem quite like it... It's original, creative, and I love it! Good job, so far, I like all of your poetry. You'll be ...

I really like it. Especially the vulnerability I felt coming from the narrator. I felt kind of remorseful for the woman. What made you write this? Did you have an ...

I agree with Lily, it's very good and I love the sexual feel of it. And I love how it pretty much disses cities and says that nature in general ...

Good, but like I tell everyone else, use more figurative language. Give some more imagery and hyperboles. It is good though, just needs some work. When I started writing my ...

I like it, it reminds me of things I have done, so I can relate to it. Poetry you can relate to, I think is the best. But... I think ...

Ok, I really like it even if you put it in the wrong area. It has attitude and just makes me want to say 'Hell ya!' Excuse the French, but ...

Really good, but needs some work. I've wrotten several poems like that so I know where you're coming from. But really, it is good, just take sometime to work on ...