break~my~heart

I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings over and over I just kept cringing at your dialogue, and plot. Where is your originality? If sex is what you want to ...

He saw an angel of this he was sure, I have to say, this line reminded so much of David Blunt's song 'Beautiful'. God that song was annoying... Ask me ...

Broken hearted souls, you are welcome here tonight. C rying infants who were abandoned, come You who need the love of one another, Gather under the cedar tree , your ...

When I first heard my lover speak, his voice was just a low whisper in the sound of the rushing wind. Barely audible but distinguished nonetheless. His hair was like ...

hi there! me again :wink: For some reason, I love short poems. They're always the most beautiful. And you've certainly kept it that way with this piece! I have nothing ...

I never claimed that I was perfect. awesome opening! In fact, I know that I was the polar opposite. But you : Pressured and pressured, Wanted me to be like ...

[quote="supersweetie"]you hurt i hurt you go through rough times ; me not so much perhaps "many" would be better. correct grammar sounds better. you tell me everything. i understand and ...

oh. wow. writewatiwant, you are soooooo talented!! seriously, I can't think of anything really to point out critique worthy that the others haven't already. but your piece totally left me ...

oooh I liked this alot!!! (this guy sounds really hot :wink: ) hey!! I rhymed!!! uh huh oh yea! 8) Soooo....anyways....this won't even count as a review, becaaaause, guess what? ...

The whole poem was themed "violence", so the title of the whole poem was called "More than Just Violence". But I only felt one piece actually seemed pretty decent and ...

i have written this poem a very long time ago..i just dig this in my old notebook's pile and have decided to post..... i love you above anyone do (did ...

this is so good!! and when I was reading it, I was like, wow, this is so much like Because of You by kelly clarkson!! And then that song came ...

All right so here I go. The idea behind the poem as all ideas should be is great. The poems funny i will grant you that. Also the use of ...

beautiful, beautiful poem. Loved it completely :D Nothing really to critique here...... Except, what's with the numbers?? Only thing I didn't understand completely. Gosh gold star! ( I felt like ...

Beautiful. Simply gorgeous. I can't believe you wrote that in seconds!!! Turning green over here Lol (I think we both know why) :wink: And I think we both were counting ...