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Very nice. :) I really liked it. I nearly started crying about Fred's death again! As Harry, Ron and Hermione left the headmaster’s office they realised that the war wasn’t ...

I like this a lot. I wonder what gave you the idea. It's a very nice idea. I think, to add to the feel, it would be nice if you ...

That was v.v funny, and just as good as your last peice. :) I loved the way he tried to use Bella as a shield. That made me laugh out ...

How are you only thirteen?! I glanced at your age, thinking that you'd be twenty or something! I absolutely adored this. I think this slightly ruins the rhyme and rhythmn: ...

I really really like it. You have a really nice writing style and after I've commented on this, I'm moving onto your next bit :). Er, the only thing I ...

This is a very nice story; it flows very well from one paragraph to the next and is seriously engaging. Ok here's me being pinickity: Firstly, it's better grammar to ...

I liked it a lot, it was interesting to read, but it was basically retelling the start of the novel, it would be nice for you to do something that ...

Hahhahahahhahahahahahahhahaaaaa, I loved so many things about that! It was flipping amazing! I laughed so much.I love it when harry says: Harry: Does this mean Hermione’s out of Dumbledore’s Army?

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. That is how much, loud and long I laughed. Lol, that was such a good idea! I love: Oh no I have to crap, and

Yes, I liked a lot, but I agree with everyone else, either shorten and grab hold of one idea - maybe her feelings - and create a poem or lengthen ...

I really don't know how you write like that. I love poetry, but I just can't write it. Plus, just wow, that poem is going to be one of those ...

I love the point of view, all basic and childish, that's very effective. And I didn't really know what was going on until the end and that was so sad. ...

V. nice, you have a nice writing style and I would enjoy reading on. I think, sometimes, to get rid of repetitiveity (I know - can't spell) of sentence structures, ...

I think Stephanie Meyer is pretty average. But that was really good. :) I loved it. It's only a joke anyway...I loved it and it was pretty brave of you ...

OOOOOOOO, I LOVE IT. I really like the layout of it and the use of bold and the reptition really works for me. Bloody Kisses give eternal life, take your ...