I really don't know how you write like that. I love poetry, but I just can't write it.
Plus, just wow, that poem is going to be one of those things that sticks in my head for years.
And plus, amazing issue/topic. Original, strong and true.
I agree: short, simple words often make poems stronger.
However, you, I think, have pulled it off
And, because there is more long words than simple, the last line stands out strong.
To be honest, I loved it and you should be so, so pleased.
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