bludragon525

Hey! I liked this poem because I could relate to it very well. However....... (yes, there's always a "however".) I didn't like the repetition of "Keep walking." It did add ...

Hey! I liked your poem. It's sad how everyone's sooo impatient nowadays, and can't read the whole thing. Personally, I read it all and loved it. Usually I don't read ...

Hey! I liked your poem. I found it to be lacking a bit, but you had a very nice imagery and idea. Lost in logic, trying to defy all reason. ...

Hey! Great poem! I could totally relate to it. My middle school's basically the same way...... He said, she said, I said "quiet." I agree with dogs on this line. ...

Hey!!! I couldn't really relate to anything in the first couple of stanzas, but when you got the the last part, it opened up what you were trying to say. ...

Hey! Great poem! This poem did add in most feelings: sadness, depression, grief, and growing suspension. Which is pretty hard to do in a poem, but I thought you did ...

Hey! I liked your poem! I usually find love poems too cliche for my taste, but this was one rare exception. Your poem was a little to jumpy; it went ...

Hey! I agree with FLyerS. I'm not positive, but I think you're talking about a soulmate, aren't you? I just keep humming each day. I thought this was a bit ...

Hey! Cool poem! Knowledge has arrived, it's [s] labyrinthine[/s] labyrinth mind Correct those mistakes. S'il vous plait. Put your periods after your stanzas please. Also put your commas in. I ...

Hey! I liked your introduction. It's short, but good. Maybe you should lengthen it a little bit? I was never a normal kid. New beginning, perhaps? This one just gets ...

Hey! Awesome poem!!! I don't quite understand the click and the finger part. What does it have to do with the poem? You had a few spelling mistakes. If you ...

Hey! Um, I don't think I really got the point/meaning of this poem. As far as I can tell, you're death, and that's about it. What are you trying to ...

Hey! Good poem. I didn't really get it at first, but after reading it a couple of times, it finally made sense. I think it would be a bit easier ...

Hey! Wow..... That kept me captivated from the very start. Well done! The wind whipped at my hair like an angry beast, whispering dark secrets into my ears. The street ...

Hey! Great poem. It brought out the little kid in me, when I would complain about practicing the violin..... But back to the point. Stop it you metal brick; Just ...