bludragon525

Hey!!!!! I liked this poem. You had a very powerful poem, and I found I could relate to it very well. Now, on to the review.... No one can see ...

Hey! Hm. This was okay. It follows the usual love story, which isn't exactly my favorite theme, but it was okay. I love you but keep praying. What do you ...

Hey! Awesome job! This poem creates a great imagery of someone who's deeply in love with someone else, yet she faces the the true side of him when he turns ...

Hey! Hm. I don't really know what to think of this poem. I don't dislike it, but I'm not too fond of it either. You're rhythm and rhyme sounded forced ...

Hey! This piece is begging for some proper punctuation. Commas, periods, etc.; they all need more work. Um, you could use a ton more detail too. Your words almost seemed.... ...

Hey! I liked this. The characters felt very real to me, and I could almost "see" the husband abusing the woman. Great job! Dinner on table, children quiet I would ...

Hey! I liked this. I just found a few things here and there.... 1) Damien couldn’t move. He didn’t dare speak. Petrified, he could only gape at Nala’s brazen curiosity. ...

Hey! I liked this poem. It tells a story of someone going back through old photos, each which brings a memory back from that hazy childhood. The imagery was great. ...

Hey! I really liked this! There's just a few things I'd like to point out. The night was very frigid compared to a typical September evening in Boston. It was ...

Hey! I was enthralled. By what she was. What's with this??? Story beginnings usually don't start with two sentence fragments, do they? G'd day Oliver, may I try the pipe? ...

Hey!!!! Great job! There's just a few things I'd like to point out. Being a dream didn’t make it any less real. I had to read this twice to get ...

Wow. Your descriptions are absolutely amazing . I didn't find anything really, except for a few spelling mistakes here and there. “Pain without love.” Three Days Grace I was wondering ...

Hey!!!! This is actually quite good! Some poems that are this short tend to not bring out its meaning fully enough, which leaves the reader confused. This, on the other ...

Hey!!!!!! I liked your poem! I love rhyming poems, and you made it seem so effortless. *tinges a little green* I wish I could do that. Your rhythm did break ...

Hey! Great! Awesome job. I was grinning and laughing the whole time I was reading this; I must have looked like a madman. I love this story a lot so ...