bloodybelle01

NOOOOOOOO!!! I've not even read many of the other parts (I think I read one of them) and I don't want George to die! For some reason I like him... ...

Interesting topics that you talk about... was that like Yoda-speak? I'm never quite sure. This was soooooooo, sooooooooooo good. I haven't read the rest but of this but I definitely, ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you and did I mention- thank you! Are you wondering what that was about? Well I'm going to tell ...

This was deep and relatable, which I loved! There are some significant spacing errors but that my just be the site screwing it up, take a look at it and ...

This was heart wrenching and I haven't even read what came before this chapter! I am utterly speechless and I don't even know why! I would just like to quickly ...

Wow, this was utterly beautiful and captivating to the extreme! You did an absolutely excellent job in writing this!I just want to mention that I haven't read the rest of ...

Hello MJCherylyn, I think I prefer our current idea of what a hero is actually... but this was still really, really, really, really interesting. To begin with I want to ...

The changes in POV were slightly off-putting and disappointing (especially as I don't know what happens in the rest of the story). My favourite piece in the whole thing was ...

I was just instantly intrigued for some reason despite not having read the previous chapters. So congratulations on a good beginning to the chapter. Your whole work was quite good ...

Interesting concepts and beautiful language, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this but I was a little confused when you started talking about music in the second stanza with no transition or ...

I would definitely recommend breaking this up into more stanzas than you have done as it quite a long piece and makes it very intimidating to someone clicking on your ...

There is nothing introducing your characters. I get the impression that this was based off of something else or involving characters from something else which I do not know about ...

I loved all the depth and different types of emotions you portrayed in this piece!!!! I loved them a lot!!!!! *DISCLAIMER !!!!! !!!! !!!!!* My computer crashed whilst I was ...

I like the themes of betrayal that are laced through this piece!... but I would of thought that it would've taken more than a few words to change the motives, ...

The font here was a bit distracting and I couldn't get all the way through it but the start was nice. A few things to mention... there are should be ...