bethanyoverload

Thankyou guys. Your advice has helped me and I am starting to get better. I hope I see you two around some time. ~'~Beth~'~

Very interesting. It describes the moods of the holidays nicely. Good job!

Heh Heh. I can taist them! I really think its cool that you decided to write about food.

*speackless* Aw.That was a very touching poem. I loved it. I have nothing against it.

It was a good poem all though i think that you needed to support it more.

Wow! Now that was a very good poem, you should keep doing what your doing!

The poem was ok. I think to make it better you should add more descriptive words then "awsome" and "boring". Good Luck!

that was an over all good poem. though i have a question about your icon, How do you know the guys name was "dave"???heh heh ,j/k i had to say ...

This was a nice change, now-a-days no one even mentions that God is up there...some where

i think that trident makes a good point also. but the over all writing was ok

very nice,the over all flow was good

that was very nice =3

i totally agree. ever sence i started to be laybeled i just told people im a person,not a cereal. Your a smart girl,im glad that youdicided to make this point. ...

i agree very much so with that point of veiw. They way that you conveyed your message was very well. GoooD Job!

i love it! short and sweet,and to the pencil's point