Published January 5, 2008
Wild flowers are like love
it flows
they both rise within you
There's many different colors of both
they dies and grows
love go through cycles
Wild flowers need love
When the rain falls down on them
you feel warm and cozy
only because you know
you have love
and
wild flowers...
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ummm how do flowers 'flow'
lulu
I personaly would change a few things...
I would say:
Wild flowers are like love...
The two flow (insert adverb here)...
Here I would go with something like:
They both rise from within you...
Here:
There are different colors of both...
They die and they grow...
They go through cycles...
Flowers need love...
And love needs flowers...
When the rain falls down on them...
You will feel warm and cozy...
Only because you know...
You have your love...
And your wildflowers...
Hope it helps.
~Star
It was a good poem all though i think that you needed to support it more.