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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Another Day-Chapter One

    Hey, I'm here to do a review! I love the plot. Even though it's apocalyptic, it seems not utterly hopeless. I like how you gave the audience a feel for ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Empty 1

    Hi, I'm here to review! I like the subject of the poem and there are only a couple of things I have to note on. If you omit the part ...

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Everything Is Just There.

    The first time I read this I didn't like it. To be honest it was very weighted and slow. Most readers like to be able to read something smoothly. I ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    This poem is interesting and is in a new format that I'm not used to. I love that you have a good vocabulary, but I think that it was distracting ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Disconnected

    Hi, I'm here to review! I love this poem. This is the kind of style I write in, so I do have a biased opinion. I only had one problem ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Mr. Jerry

    This is a review. First of all, I think that your poem flows pretty nicely. I used to write poems a lot like this one. Although it doesn't have much ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Uneven Flow of Ink on a Cool Morning

    Ahhhh this is great! I admire this style. I have not seen this yet and hope to see more like it! I love how the narrator keeps falling, and that's ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: memoni

    I'm doing a review. My review won't take it line by line, ain't nobody got time fo dat. I really enjoyed the whimsical feel of this poem. It's so nostalgic ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Packing List

    This was a pretty good list poem! List poems aren't my favorite since they don't require much effort in the content, but rely heavily on punctuation. You did a good ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Auction

    Hi! I will start out with what I liked most. The last sentence is the best part of the poem, it added depth to it. I like that you capitalized ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When we were young

    WOW. That is the first word that comes to mind when reading this. Beautiful work here. Even though the poem is a little lengthy, it was like a story. As ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: I'm not depressed.

    Now this is a poem that I can relate to. Great subject matter, especially for a site full of poets. :) All poets have been through this constant fight between ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Oh My Love, My Love

    Hi! Okay so I like the repetition of "Oh my love, my love." Love stories are some of my favorite poetry subjects. I felt like there was a disconnect though ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Death's Reply to Life

    This is such an intriguing piece. I really appreciate the untrusting tone set by the structure of the poem. The shape of poems can change the reader's outlook on the ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Different is okay.

    Hi there! I love the message of this poem. I like how it has a refined style, so I can tell that you thought a lot about punctuation. In poetry, ...

    Aug 1, 2013


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