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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Another Day-Chapter One

    Hey, I'm here to do a review! I love the plot. Even though it's apocalyptic, it seems not utterly hopeless. I like how you gave the audience a feel for ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Empty 1

    Hi, I'm here to review! I like the subject of the poem and there are only a couple of things I have to note on. If you omit the part ...

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Everything Is Just There.

    The first time I read this I didn't like it. To be honest it was very weighted and slow. Most readers like to be able to read something smoothly. I ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    This poem is interesting and is in a new format that I'm not used to. I love that you have a good vocabulary, but I think that it was distracting ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Disconnected

    Hi, I'm here to review! I love this poem. This is the kind of style I write in, so I do have a biased opinion. I only had one problem ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Mr. Jerry

    This is a review. First of all, I think that your poem flows pretty nicely. I used to write poems a lot like this one. Although it doesn't have much ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Uneven Flow of Ink on a Cool Morning

    Ahhhh this is great! I admire this style. I have not seen this yet and hope to see more like it! I love how the narrator keeps falling, and that's ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: memoni

    I'm doing a review. My review won't take it line by line, ain't nobody got time fo dat. I really enjoyed the whimsical feel of this poem. It's so nostalgic ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Packing List

    This was a pretty good list poem! List poems aren't my favorite since they don't require much effort in the content, but rely heavily on punctuation. You did a good ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Auction

    Hi! I will start out with what I liked most. The last sentence is the best part of the poem, it added depth to it. I like that you capitalized ...

    Aug 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When we were young

    WOW. That is the first word that comes to mind when reading this. Beautiful work here. Even though the poem is a little lengthy, it was like a story. As ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: I'm not depressed.

    Now this is a poem that I can relate to. Great subject matter, especially for a site full of poets. :) All poets have been through this constant fight between ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Oh My Love, My Love

    Hi! Okay so I like the repetition of "Oh my love, my love." Love stories are some of my favorite poetry subjects. I felt like there was a disconnect though ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Death's Reply to Life

    This is such an intriguing piece. I really appreciate the untrusting tone set by the structure of the poem. The shape of poems can change the reader's outlook on the ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Different is okay.

    Hi there! I love the message of this poem. I like how it has a refined style, so I can tell that you thought a lot about punctuation. In poetry, ...

    Aug 1, 2013


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings